Sunday, October 12, 2008

I Saw An Angel Comments

Rating: 4.8

A mother wearing dark
Black cloth
Waiting, weeping and searching
For her child
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Asif Baloch
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Shiza Khan 25 October 2008

great one.. well expressed

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C T Heart 23 October 2008

great angel... poetically expressed well. a 10.

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Angels are always with us and we see them in the great and small.Beautiful.A ten

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 October 2008

I love your angel. This is a poem for mankind. Lovely work. 10+

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Gargi Saha 18 October 2008

A very meaningful &suggestive poem. Well done u get 10++

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Sandra Fowler 16 October 2008

In Heaven, we are told, that the angels of little children always behold the Face of God. Written from the depths of your compassionate heart. Ten for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Anjali Sinha 15 October 2008

nice lots of depth in this poem 10+ love anjali

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Emo Seb 15 October 2008

deep. i love it. seb

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 15 October 2008

we are indeed all angels till some vice grips us and then mutilates our innocence into something demoniac....all angels falling hiding fleeing....very nice thought inspiring write aijaz....you are blossoming!

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Seema Aarella 15 October 2008

Touching....! angels on earth in human disguise but living the same cursed lives...u have great talent and a soft core that pines and melts!

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Evaughn Gray 14 October 2008

that's so sad and heartbreaking... for me it's crying like you had black tears running down your cheeks.. heartbreaking piece..~Love Hazel

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Seema Chowdhury 14 October 2008

another wonderful composition. selection of words are excellent and words are thought provoking.

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Chitra - 14 October 2008

I too see an angel of grace in these lines

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 October 2008

I believe by reading more top notch poetry would definitely strengthen your writing.all the best to you in your future writes.

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Ency Bearis 14 October 2008

a great write..nice theme...good verses... Ency Bearis

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Reshma Ramesh 14 October 2008

ahh! ! this is very lovely.....

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 October 2008

Very good subject. The refrain is apt. Last stanza is very good. Please try to be brief, Ershad Mazumdar often advises me so. If time permits read my old poem MY SWEAT and MY MOMENTS. Similar theme..

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i saw an angel too, he wrote this.

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C T Heart 12 October 2008

Explicitly penned out well about poverty, focused more on little children...a ten.

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