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wow.beautifully written.made my poetry seem so 'small' in comparison.haha

I love how you've described everything, it's beautiful.

A lovely poem...thanks for sharing this

Great imagery....an outstanding poem.....I loved it.10

Nicely written...! ! ! Keep up the fine work. Best, Trade.

you have built up your thoughts very well and the last two lines are simply unforgettable.10 Mamta

Amazing flow in the line of thought and a luminous tribute to your beloved.. This is poetry at its best. Thanks.

eloquent flowing poetic lines...good piece...10

Wonderful poetry Sadiqullah, flows along so beautifully..10

deeply drenched in divine love. CP

...your search simply flows...! ! ! ! ! !

sadiq..............bravo! bravo! what a timeless poem......it has a life of its own..........superb and well done as always........

Splendid work here....You tease, work, and capture the pure essence of metaphoric value.....Crisp, tight structural employment, affords the Reader, a smooth, serpentined read.A solid slice of printworthy poetics. F j R 2009

We left with these 'suns who descend behind the walls'. At last this poem is melancholy and there is no harm.

A beautifully written poem, full of love and woven together so well, 10 Lynda xx

wowwwwwww your poem has left me breathless! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! -10 anjali

Very eloquent. A luminous tapestry of emotional feelings. You have a way with words. Kind regards, Sandra

heart seems to rifflle the pages of love by the quest and queriesand to delve out the musk.......... yet the luscious glow ingenious, eloquently opassionate.....well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

hpe u end the searching ths time...hpe u found her in ur heart already..bind together, , , together as one... ths s a very nice poem dear friend... naizz

Very well constructed, a small suggestion, it is rather lengthly and loses the reader as many lengthly writes do, none the less very good! ! Bonnie