I Will Become Poem by Captain Cur

I Will Become

Rating: 5.0


Love Me
for what i am not
and I will become.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 23 June 2013

I must say this short write is really good.capt. A little says a whole lot. Good lines.

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Patricia Grantham 23 June 2013

I must say this short write is really good.capt. A little says a whole lot. Good lines.

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Heather Wilkins 19 June 2013

nice, short sweet and to the point. nice read

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Shahzia Batool 16 June 2013

an example of diversity in your poetry! ! !

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David Wood 13 June 2013

Thats the way to go Captain.

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Anjandev Roy 05 April 2021

Brilliant

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 July 2018

yes love has the force to create a new being.. here personally a new you...... it is true.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Danny Draper 24 October 2013

I love this not for what it is, but for what it is not.

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Alookh (matin) 14 September 2013

LOVE this one! ! ! ! ! WOoooooow........i love ur works: D

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Farah Ilyas 02 July 2013

nice, short but very sane in nature like sage saying. brillliant

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