If I Cry........ Poem by Sameer Ahmed

If I Cry........

Rating: 4.7


If I cry
Don't stop me
Let the rain of tears fall on ground
And moisten the soil
For I like its silty fragrance.

If I cry
Don't look at me
For I will wipe off
The pearl like droplets
And become insomniac.

If I cry
Don't befuddle me
For it will disrupt
The streamline flow
Of my contemplations.

If I cry
Don't pat my sodden cheeks
For it will not help me
Removing the clouds of self-pity
From my inner vibe.

If I cry
Don't halt me
Let the watermark form on the floor
For it will guide me
To the upcomings.

If I stop
And recoup myself
Don't interrupt me
Let a new thought be born
For the sake of my teardrops.




(1/3/2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

How brave to allow yourself to cry in front of others. I'm afraid it's something I can't do. That being said, should you go through it all alone? - Even if you feel it does make you stronger in the end? Lovely written.

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Mishah Jahangir 18 April 2009

if i would have been ur 4end i would never have let u cry n if i see any of my friend crying i don't fink so any one of them can stop me from stopping them from crying! crying doesn't fix up things but courage does! A very heart touching and well written poem! keep it up but keep smiling! ; -)

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

i agree this is an amazing poem

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Amber Vasquez 08 April 2009

This poem is so well written. as most of yours are.

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Rosalita Fernandez 15 March 2009

beautifully written well done

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 16 July 2009

Beautiful poem. If I appreciate don't stop me let my adoration flow out from my heart and praise Sameer Ahmed For like the fullness and fragrance of this.................

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Erica Bowden 23 June 2009

This is probably my favorite poem that I've read. It is beautiful.

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if i cry donot stop me... what an thought dear... u deserve 10. i u get the time pse read mine 'Cry not' and find similarity tks

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Joyce Lam 04 June 2009

Nice poem....hope everyone become stronger after they cried

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

Nice and lucid, lovely poem. 10++

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