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In Memories, You’ll Find Me

Rating: 5.0

Sorrow has spread quickly through out my heart
Nothing is left but the pain as feelings depart
Wild fires of rage burn through the walls of my soul
Flames of despair and anger are out of control
Like a virus you wiped out my will to live
Terror fills my mind as the hate arrives
Many nights we made love under the stars
Your vow of forever left deep ugly scars
I was just a pawn and you played it through
You acted your part well and I never knew

So let me leave you with this simple thought
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Sylvia Feeley 06 December 2008

No one is ever worth the taking of your life. Sometimes the pain and hurt are so great that you may think so, but it never is.

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Tsira Goge 15 November 2008

Flames of despair and anger are out of control Like a virus you wiped out my will to live/ ...................................................... Sincere poems.... Good passages... 10... Tsira

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Rachael Miroddi 21 September 2008

your poems really ample in emotion. i love the rythm and feeling you put into each and everyone of them. I look forward to see how you expand your writing to simple things because i beleive your the kind of writer that can make small things very beautiful and interesting with your words. keep up the great work! ! much respect.

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Viola Grey 21 September 2008

you write well beyond your years...a gift indeed...I hope to read more from you....put down that metaphorical gun, there's too much yet to see...great work

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Paul Butters 21 September 2008

I trust you are only IMAGINING what can happen at the hands of a femme fatale! Very intense, expressive poetry. Excellent.

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Qendresa Ulaj 20 September 2008

love this one... :) i give u a ten

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 September 2008

A moving composition with with wonderful metaphors,10 for it.

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Aijaz Asif 20 September 2008

amazingly good write dude and grreat rrhymes as im rhymes fan i like the way of your writing.....i kill myself evvertime i write any poem and thats a different pleasure..write dude, write your feelings, emotions a pen dip in the ink of tears and blood of broken heart and put it in the book of shatterred dreams...thanks

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Stephanie Saba 19 September 2008

Wow, greatly written! I love it! ! ! :) But no need to hurt yourself!

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Bob Gibson 19 September 2008

This poem was written with such depth of feeling! but no one, no one on this earth is worth your life! You are a poet! put your feelings into words, that way we all win, regards Bob

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