In My Garden Poem by Bob Blackwell

In My Garden

Rating: 4.6


I watch as the days brightness alters
from sunrise, sunset, nightfall,
to when the moon and stars light up,
and I can see the Milky Way.

I watch the seasons change from
spring growth, to summer heat,
autumn leaves, winter rot with
rain, sun, wind, frost, and snow.

I study, ants, worms, slugs and snails.
Leaves, buds, trees and flowers;
bees, wasps, white bellied sunbirds,
and many butterflies stop for nectar.

But most of all as I sit in my garden,
I feel angry, sad, confused, when I think,
how man persecutes man, and stamps
him under foot to break his will.

How his power corrupts,
his laws cheat, and
his desires tempt him, to steal,
murder, rape, abuse and wound.

How his beliefs, ideas, and dogma’s;
separate, judge, blame, confuse,
causing hurt, harm, even wars, so
his love wasted, and his charity ignored.

How his belief might is right, allows
governmental avarice, politician’s spin,
and leaders lies to make wars, in which
thousands die, and millions come to hate.

How his miasma blocks out truth, hope
new optimism, a talk of peace,
freedom cries ignored, and answers given
shrouded with false reasons for not ending war.

Relaxing in my spring garden full of hope,
surrounded by lovely flowering shrubs,
I mostly hear the black crows cry but
have just one wish, that a red eyed dove brings
peace, commonsense, love, understanding,
and compassion to the people of our world.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 05 January 2009

A sublime juxtaposition of the pastoral and the political. Your passion becomes you. Your garden sounds lovely. This one is definitely worth reading and re-reading. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Meggie Gultiano 28 December 2008

And i wholeheartedly agree with you..a nice and a pleasure to read..Thanks Bob for sharing your thoughts.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 07 December 2008

one from the heart- agreat thought. all our organisations are governed by fear, fear can only destroy-10

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Fay Slimm 23 August 2008

Amen, Amen and Amen again to the hopeful wish you so succinctly brought out towards the end of the piece. Wonderful to read through aloud. Thank you Bob.

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Kesav Easwaran 10 August 2008

beautiful poem, bob...the line ' his love wasted and his charity ignored' is to me most eye catching, in the garden there... 10

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Seema Chowdhury 05 November 2009

such a lovely poem. very niceand refreshing. i felt as if i was there. pl see my 3 new poems 1. a prayer for children 2. walk through life 3. what makes you so special

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Tracy Scheepers 02 November 2009

I often sit in my garden as well and pray that everyone in this world would just take the time to stop and smell the roses.... if they could appreciate the little things maybe then peace would be in the 'not too far' distance.... Nice poem - something I myself can relate to - the same questions seem to cross my mind on a daily basis.

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Ritty Patnaik 26 July 2009

dear bob, i am a garden lover too! forget everything when i am there.when we sit and relax, many thoughts make their way to our minds, which are disturbing and irritating, specially over those we have no control.politics, is a dirty game.too much power, irresponsibly used, has negative results.your poem is beautiful, a blend of natures beauty, and the reality of materialism.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 21 May 2009

Sat in my garden reading, feeling the gold of day then your mood changed, dark nights of the soul! Hero''s forgotten overnight, Our young people playing the deadly game politicians and leaders control. Can we believe that we will see friend greeting foe, I cannot. As the song goes it's all an illusion. Powerful write Bob

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Mamta Agarwal 31 January 2009

After taking me through the beauty of seasons, you gently take the reader to the ugliness with which man has polluted his life. all humanity is crying for good sense to prevail and peace reign...very thought provoking lovely and moving 10 mamta

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