When the island of our eyesSoaks in the rainTake my hands friendPurify my heartPurify my soulLet me glowLet us vowEternal friendship In the mirrored eyeswhich have no endArcane
its deep thats really deep were u sad when u wrote that cause its sounds like it cause i know when i'm feeling a certain way i'll write how i feel at that time an keep it as a memory thats y asked
Thank you for sharing..Your words made me hold my breath as I read
Written so well... great work here
Great how with Simple Lines you gave a Great Message
OMG breathtaking no words to say except wonderful work :)
wah! ! ! !
you are a very good poet.
wow! thatz all i can say
NICE. VERY POIGNANTLY EXPRESSED AND EMOTIONS AND FRIENDSHIP CLEARLY FELT. YES, YOU ARE A POET. THANK YOU! CAROL
very well penned loved this one
goood poem with a beautiful composition...............beautiful.....
Nothing more beautiful than the divine unconditional friendship of two souls...great poem! -Cathy
that was beautiful, it was nice, soft and very tender! loved it, great poem goes with a great poet~Hazel G.E
I love the wroding, very interesting.10
Heartfelt your poem. Arcane.
Very well written.....I enjoyed it.
Giving it a 10.
The eyes, indeed, are the 'mirror' of our souls.
We are ALL related. Nice poem.
nightingale, it is very warm poems - an oath of friendship which is very much appreciated/// 10...
You and your friends not a two seeing through eyes, very good poem
its the world in jus 10 lines...awesome write
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