Per. Nig.

In The Mirrored Eyes

When the island of our eyes
Soaks in the rain
Take my hands friend
Purify my heart
Purify my soul
Let me glow
Let us vow
Eternal friendship
In the mirrored eyes
which have no end
Arcane

Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 4, 2008
Poem Edited: Thursday, June 30, 2011

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  • Shabre Moore (1/22/2009 8:08:00 AM)

    its deep thats really deep were u sad when u wrote that cause its sounds like it cause i know when i'm feeling a certain way i'll write how i feel at that time an keep it as a memory thats y asked

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  • Rachel Butler (11/28/2008 1:18:00 PM)

    Thank you for sharing..Your words made me hold my breath as I read

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  • Ema Nekaf (11/24/2008 11:10:00 AM)

    Great structure.
    Great wordage.
    Great imagery.
    Great poem.

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  • Krista Churchill (11/24/2008 1:36:00 AM)

    Written so well... great work here


    krista

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  • Sarah AbdullahSarah Abdullah (10/15/2008 2:17:00 PM)

    Simple Words
    Million Meanings
    Great how with Simple Lines you gave a Great Message

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  • Annie Girl (10/15/2008 10:47:00 AM)

    OMG breathtaking no words to say except wonderful work :)

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  • ♥ Brie {And Eric} ♥ (10/15/2008 10:05:00 AM)

    wah! ! ! !
    love it
    you are a very good poet.
    -brie

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  • Charlotte Davis (10/11/2008 4:39:00 PM)

    wow! thatz all i can say

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  • Carol Rhodes (10/11/2008 12:57:00 PM)

    NICE. VERY POIGNANTLY EXPRESSED AND EMOTIONS AND FRIENDSHIP CLEARLY FELT. YES, YOU ARE A POET. THANK YOU! CAROL

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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/10/2008 2:10:00 AM)

    very well penned loved this one

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  • Anna jonson (10/7/2008 12:21:00 PM)

    goood poem with a beautiful composition...............beautiful.....

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  • Cathleen Hodgkinson (10/7/2008 12:31:00 AM)

    Nothing more beautiful than the divine unconditional friendship of two souls...great poem! -Cathy

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  • Evaughn GrayEvaughn Gray (10/6/2008 11:50:00 PM)

    that was beautiful, it was nice, soft and very tender! loved it, great poem goes with a great poet~Hazel G.E

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  • Brianna Wilshusen (10/6/2008 7:45:00 AM)

    I love the wroding, very interesting.10

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  • C. P. SharmaC. P. Sharma (10/6/2008 6:44:00 AM)

    Heartfelt your poem. Arcane.

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  • Linda Weischedel (10/5/2008 2:49:00 PM)

    Very well written.....I enjoyed it.
    Giving it a 10.

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  • Lawrence S. Pertillar (10/5/2008 2:05:00 PM)

    The eyes, indeed, are the 'mirror' of our souls.
    We are ALL related. Nice poem.

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  • Tsira Goge (10/5/2008 1:23:00 PM)

    nightingale, it is very warm poems - an oath of friendship which is very much appreciated/// 10...
    Tsira

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  • Cheung Shun Sang (10/5/2008 1:13:00 PM)

    You and your friends not a two seeing through eyes, very good poem

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  • Enigma Forever (10/5/2008 9:43:00 AM)

    its the world in jus 10 lines...awesome write

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