Inside My Secret Chamber Poem by Unwritten Soul

Inside My Secret Chamber

Rating: 3.9


All i am here
Only a soul in this heart
Living within the beat chamber
Vibrating this life in every second
Counting days and years till it will be stopped
Like the clock sounds, tick tock we're passing time
Still i am here learning to catch my past beats
The old running moments escaped from my pulses
Now, searching who i am in each breath i had
Mistakes I have done, written as scars
Reveal me things untold by smiles
Time will keep flying, no waiting
But the child in me still learning
For who i am, and what i living for
Till the end of my given time
Searching myself, my soul
I will find inside here
My heart chamber
After mistakes
resolves mistakes
For another chance
I will take, with no surrender
Learning more as who i am here
Completing mystery of my unwritten soul
To be answered, in the last page of my days
Oh my dear LORD, lead me to guide in your way,
I am on my way waiting, to meet You soon someday

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just a writing i have done to fill my early morning thought..as times moving to another space and steal our the memories in universe..Lost in paradise_SOul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chandra Thiagarajan 22 December 2012

A sincere prayer to God to lead you from inside your Secret Chamber is a lovely poem to enjoy.Thanks.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 17 December 2012

We are here on this earth to learn something and only God knows what and why. We should enjoy life every second, be grateful for another and another day and never spend the time in sadness. As I see, our life is like a software in God's computer and we each put our life experiences into it, and only He knows what happens with that data. Wishing you the best and the happiest time until you are here.

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Shahzia Batool 14 December 2012

The inside of my secret chamber is a beautiful poem on your credit soul esp. the last lines: I will take, with no surrender Learning more as who i am here Completing mystery of my unwritten soul To be answered...................

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Jahan Zeb 13 December 2012

Fantastic Soul this is very nice. I loved the idea in your poem really. A fantastic message. The struggle to find yourself within yourself. You really are a mystery, not only for me but also for your own self. The really speaks for you. I liked the waves like style of your poem. Marvelous_Soul

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Solmon Jejemore Gbemiga 12 December 2012

Good written piece. good expressions.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 May 2018

In order to get wisdom and peace soul searches in the secret chamber of the body. Keeping this theme you have startlingly inscribed this poem which touches the hearts of the readers. I love the following lines...... Oh my dear LORD, lead me to guide in your way, I am on my way waiting, to meet You soon someday. A great write.

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Valsa George 11 January 2013

Locked within the secret chamber of the body, the soul seeks to fulfill its mission here and prepares to fly to a domain of limitless bliss and boundless freedom! A great write, Soul!

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James Timothy Jarrett 04 January 2013

Really good write. kudos

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Guess Who 25 December 2012

There are times in our lives when we just sit around wondering, Am i doing the right thing? Am i taking the right decisions? .......... Time when we just revive our memories our mistakes, trying to discover what went wrong, trying to correct the mistakes, trying to be better......... And these thoughts take place in our privacy.............. I liked your poem especially: Mistakes I have done, written as scars Reveal me things untold by smiles Time will keep flying, no waiting But the child in me still learning Beautiful expression here........ Good work soul keep the smile .... GuessWho

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Tony Karas 23 December 2012

Totally awesome! (((hug)))

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