I live within a circle
Drawn by my forefathers
To keep me safe and vigilant
Sometimes strangers come
Try to pull me out giving
Assurances- false and enticing
Many a time I long
To fly away straight to
Unknown realms where
I may flourish and expand
By redrawing a greater circle
Very insightful poetry. Congratulation sir for chosen as Member poem.
Most deserving s The Member poem of the day. Congratulations on the choice of PH, Anil Sir. So well stated thoughts and summing up the possibilities Top Marks!
A very meaningful poem. Sometimes we intend to stay in the circle that has been handed to us and there are times that we try to modify it. Brilliant thoughts nicely presented. Top marks! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The distant mountains look so beautiful. I love your safe and vigilant first stanza. The second stanza is about false assurance and the third stanza is all about lofty dreams that travel on the wings of doubts and uncertainties! A thoughtful poem. POD! Many congratulations! !
Dr. Dillip Swain's analysis of this poem is excellent.