What sets you apart
from the best of the rest?
What makes you the one
who outshines the sun?
Honey, it's the soul in you...
the soul in you...
the soul in you
(3/31/06)
Ah wonderful Esther, I knew you couldn't play hard to get forever.
A pleasure to read Esther. and a delightful ending, which gave such expression when I read it. Love Ernestine XXX
This is crafted so well - love the message and the way it trails off in a whisper. -chuck
simle yet perfectly written..love the emphasis on last line... 'the soul in you' Preets
Esther, them's my sentiments exactly. Beautifully expressed and so simple. Thanks. love, Alison
A truly wonderful poem - leading to wonder. 'I'm not a poet and I know it' was also a wonderful poem. Absolutely a 10.
You're absolutely right Esther! And your soul certainly sets you apart as a beautiful person! I love this poem. This is one of those things I would clip out and hang on my fridge just to remind myself of this! Sincerely, mary
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Esther, How nice to read your words, again. This is just lovely...I especially like the way the last three lines repeat, the sound of them when read aloud...the way they look on the page...the metaphoric shine... Sandra