. It's Over... (Funny) Poem by Eyan Desir

powerful bullet words...shot poetic at point blank! ...10

Its easy to say 'It's over'. You expressed your feeling very well and straight. Short and clean.

that's right u go do that nice write i can relate powerful and straight 2 the point nice

Life works in this way. A love goes and soon another one comes.

Lets talk about the bright side here..people like that which you described you are not...it hurts we learn to flirt again.. even by accident...iip

great thought, keep up da good work...............it's over, hurt's alot but it okay be strong, there's a time u will not braek ur heart no more.there's r good memories nd bad memories u know it how life is......peace out! ! !

OK! This one is difficult because when we hold someone as 'special' and they don't live up to our ideals of them, they break our hearts. There is a quote I like by Thomas Jefferson, 'Honesty is the first chapter in the book of Wisdom.' If everyone strived to be the best they can be to one another, less heartache. Deceit is poison to a relationship.

aww i know how it feels to have ur heart broken: (

this is well presented..it's very impressive..tho this is nicely done ian, but the thought breaks my heart..i don't want the word 'goodbye' coz it means tears.hu pa mu ti? ...naizxenia..

Hi Eyan! Another beautifully written piece. Well done! ! Saying it's over is easier said then done, but beautifully written none the less.