.. Jealousy..A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins Poem by Eyan Desir

.. Jealousy..A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins

Rating: 3.3


Resentment mixed with greed
Are the tunes she sings
From love and lust she bleed
On envy she feed
In human's core she live
Upset with what she loves
Envious of hearts possession
Dirtier than dirt
More twisted than a devil
It was her that corrupted him
And changed him into a rotten apple
Her song is a terrible thing
It opens a gate to other sins
This sour vindictive witch
Will push soul further from God
And straight into the fires of hell!

26th August 2009
All rights Eyan Desir

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Coltrin 10 September 2009

i liked it didnt make any sense in the begaining but then it was awesom wonderfull ps...read my new poem timeless thank you

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Omar Ibrahim 10 September 2009

great as usual...........10 for the man eyan

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The Understander 09 September 2009

10/10, keep writing =)

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wow....you shick me every time you write a new poem getting better and stronger in what you write..love it

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Patrick A. Martin 07 September 2009

You are right she is a wicked thing but this is a 'wicked' piece to match her.10

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Tom Fox 26 September 2009

i'm growing sick of this theological perspective...it's unfair and ridiculous...you obviously blame sexy women for everything...i'm growing tired of the hate...let's see some personal reflection, bud...

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* Naphright * 23 September 2009

i like the depth of your poems, i will read more, they make people think but are all of them metaphorically against women. its not fun for me to read being that i am a she

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Beauty Philosophy 17 September 2009

A lovely poem tackling and important human feeling which is liable to reduce love to dust instead of increasing it...Excessive Jealousy is really a sin and it stems from the FEAR of losing one's partner and by extension it bespeaks the person's lack of self- confidence, so he acts in a jealous and an over-protective way in order to keep his partner... good subject and good description too...voted 10!

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Indira Babbellapati 14 September 2009

such is the power of jealousy, i suppose!

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Romeo Della Valle 13 September 2009

Insecurity is the root of jealousy, I was a very jealous person and thank God, I was able to overcome it, I became a wise man, since I learned the hard and painful ways, that whenever there is an ending, there is a new beginning, and also I learned not to miss what is gone, but the one new and flesh that is coming my way one day, , Love and Peace, Romeo

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