July Rain In Seattle (Haiku) Poem by Denis Mair
July Rain In Seattle (Haiku)
I wake up happy for the plants, they have been giving me so much green
Such fine drizzle it's hanging in air, coming under my umbrella.
Doubly misty view through droplet-lenses beaded on eyeglass lenses
It brings relief the brown grass was waiting for, even in RAIN CITY
Pricks of coolness offer proof, my skin was endowed for subtle pleasures
Doorway spider on beaded web...rubs droplets off right leg with left leg
What a lovely photo, and sounds like you have had a good sleep in Seattle (rather than sleepless)
Beautiful expressions. Poetry will be very stagnated if we do not go beyond conventional rules. I too am often guilty if it. Thanks for sharing.
Such fine drizzle it comes under the umbrella on my morning walk. Doubly misty view through droplet-lenses beaded on eyeglass lenses It brings relief the brown grass was waiting for, even in RAIN CITY Pricks of coolness offer proof, my skin was endowed for subtle pleasures I wake up happy for the plants, they have been giving me so much green Doorway spider on beaded web rubs droplets off right leg with left leg - - - - - -Very lovely piece of poem.Thank you very much for introducing us with this form of haiku- -AMERICAN SENTENCES.. and also informing about Paul E.Nelson's book.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Thank you for the invitation to read this wonderfully constructed poem. I am very fond of this format of poetry! Thank for the informative notes as well!