Knowing Myself

Rating: 5.0
Fear said knock the door
Before the rain pour
And wet you even more
In its dark thunder roar
To crush you beneath floor

Desire said fall before war
Before they cut your crops
And take you to their shore
To work as slave in store
For life long without score

Mind said me to ignore
My fear from hearts core
My desires words of four
But told to taste the sore
Only to find my hidden ore
Saturday, August 29, 2009
Antonio Liao 01 September 2009
like a knighted warrior, life has to go on the shore..... as we know, life close no door but a forward to live, until the shadow gives no more... its final countdown.... of who we are in this world of existence...a 10 +++
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rago rago 30 August 2009
beautiful lines and well knitted words...........awesome............
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Anju Addanki 30 August 2009
Its really wonderful superb poem.
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fear..desire and mind..dealt beautifully...rhyme and rhythm goes well with each line...10
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Louis Rams 29 August 2009
i believe ' ted' said it right on all three, on that i must agree. well written a ten
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Marieta Maglas 29 August 2009
excellent poem, nice rhymes, thank you for sharing..................10
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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 August 2009
Arrrrrrrr! excelllet! with fine rhyme and rhythm judged thoughtfully! 10+
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Dr Hitesh Sheth 29 August 2009
Be light unto yourself...........a good write............
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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 29 August 2009
Very nicely said. Full of observation and insight. Liked the poem.
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Joseph Poewhit 29 August 2009
Hard times bring out one's true colors
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