Knowing Myself Poem by Kranthi Pothineni
Knowing Myself
Fear said knock the door
Before the rain pour
And wet you even more
In its dark thunder roar
To crush you beneath floor
Desire said fall before war
Before they cut your crops
And take you to their shore
To work as slave in store
For life long without score
Mind said me to ignore
My fear from hearts core
My desires words of four
But told to taste the sore
Only to find my hidden ore
'Fear, Desire, and Mind', in these three different angles 'Myself' has been judged well.
We need a little of fear to stop us from doing the wrong, and dangerous desire is to fuel our ambitions and be productive the Mind runs the show. Nice interesting write......10+++
Very nicely said. Full of observation and insight. Liked the poem.
like a knighted warrior, life has to go on the shore..... as we know, life close no door but a forward to live, until the shadow gives no more... its final countdown.... of who we are in this world of existence...a 10 +++
beautiful lines and well knitted words...........awesome............
fear..desire and mind..dealt beautifully...rhyme and rhythm goes well with each line...10
i believe ' ted' said it right on all three, on that i must agree. well written a ten
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 2:20:08 PM # 1.0.0.1119
a truely amazing poem! ! ! ! ! love it(10)