Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 198,906 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Kumarmani Mahakul - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

He opens his eyes at the dawn
someone scatters rays of spirituality on his face
and his face becomes a sun
throughout the day he lights the way of humanity.
He promotes equality and brotherhood.
He teaches us morals that are universal in nature.
He is a guide appointed by God
for the tourists like us,
who have come in this world on a pleasure trip.
He advises us not to forget the creator
and to be moderate in pleasure.
But he has a human heart, too,
when his light is reflected by his heart
we see moonlight writing on our hearts
if its love,
I am a poet like you,
and I am a human like you.
Yes, his heart is a shining blue moon!

Topic(s) of this poem: poet


Comments about Kumarmani Mahakul by Akhtar Jawad

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/4/2018 3:24:00 AM)

    Awesome tribute to a fellow poet and our beloved one Kumarmaniji, he is a fantastic human being with generous heart. he is inspired to write on nature tirelessly and we all enjoy his great poems. Thanks for this wonderful tribute..10++ (Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (6/24/2018 4:32:00 AM)

    brilliant writings on the poet Kumarmani Mahakul

    nice 10+++
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  • Khalid Saifullah (6/23/2018 10:18:00 PM)

    A nice tribute to a great contemporary poet, greatness loves greatness. (Report)Reply

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  • Lamar Cole (6/23/2018 1:19:00 AM)

    Great tribute to Kumarmani Mahakul. (Report)Reply

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  • Kelly KurtKelly Kurt (6/22/2018 11:44:00 PM)

    He is a gentleman and shining example of humankind. The language gap is not a chasm, but occasionally leaves some appreciating intent over content. (Report)Reply

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (6/22/2018 11:21:00 PM)

    A wonderful tribute to a great poet, Kumarmani
    whose poetry showers wisdom on this site.
    Elegantly crafted write.10
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  • Bill CantrellBill Cantrell (6/22/2018 3:01:00 PM)

    My friend, I was wanting to write a tribute to Mahakul too, because I see what you see in him and his poetry, you have written a wonderful tribute to a great poet! ! Wonderful truth you pen! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Rini ShibuRini Shibu (6/22/2018 11:17:00 AM)

    Wonderful tribute to kumarmani sir (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (6/22/2018 10:58:00 AM)

    Wow! Akhtar ji, you have made this evening cheerful for me and I look at the crescent moon that is growing in sky. I am speechless to express my view over your sweet and praising words. Your words have deeply touched me. By God's grace we dwell in Earth and by his grace we live and write. We see moonlight and we feel calmness. We have universal brotherhood. Your effort is highly appreciated. This is excellently drafted. A nice poetic certificate this is. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 22, 2018



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