Laying Next To Your Grave Poem by Silentpoet Grl

i sense your love so true and i think you can't move on for a long time but anyway love remains in our hearts even if our loved ones depart nice poem

Love your choice of words

To grieve is to yet know your still alive. A sadness upon a paradise is the loss of a love one. And you describe it very well. Love the poem keep writing them.

In your words, I see so much...you are a wonderful writer...so filled with things that need to be set free in your words...hugs n smiles n blessings

Death is a door that leads us to to the end, but only a new begining. I always say that 'life is school, we learn from it. Death is graduation, we're done with it' Our loved ones may leave, and grieving may seem impossible to bare, but think of how good they feel now. Great poem. Thanks for sharing, and God Bless you.

Your broken heart cries, screams with loss and pain but it's not the shards of your heart that remain Your Love that you have- not had is as stong as ever, it's still th e same- never chainged His spirit picks up the pieces- and you are suddenly whole again. Silentpoet Grl, your words are proof to the pudding... that your emotions, your passions, your Love is alive and well. another Great Piece, Great Ink! ! ! ; -) -kelly.

The lost of a love once loved is the greatest miseries of the heart. Tears shed, the chest seems a baloon overwhelmed with real pains and emotions ready to explose. I love the last lines: 'i loved you' quietly escapes as i pull my shaking hand away tears well up, burning my eyes spilling over, pouring like rain. broken shards of my heart falling next to your grave they remain. THIS FINAL ADIEU is the most touching part of this poem. Silentpoet Girl, you describe human's miseries as perfectly as it should be....Thank you for sharing and continue to write please......

A death of a love once loved is the greatest miseries of the heart. Tears shed, the chest is overwhelmed by emotions...In this instance, no words come out....but then...'i loved you' quietly escapes... tears well up, burning my eyes spilling over, pouring like rain. broken shards of my heart falling next to your grave they remain. The last 4 lines of this poem, summed up, the sadness of the last adieu! Silent Poet Grl, thanks a lot for this show of a heart's destiny paintend in words like the famous Mona Lisa....I love this most....

Absolutely a gorgerous poem that i truely adore.... love, that unique love outlasts death forever :) wonderful poem, touched my heart ~Bella

Wow, simply beautiful, absolutely amazing. You are a wonderful poet and this poem definitely expressed that. burning my eyes spilling over, pouring like rain. broken shards of my heart falling next to your grave they remain. My favorite lines right here, the poem ended absolutely amazingly, this is definitely a 10, no wait, I'll give you a 20! ! =D Wow, beautiful poem, keep on writing, you see, they only get better and better and better! ! =D