without me you will have nothing but torment and mischief
go on and leave me renounce your belief
anyway our tree has only one leaf
it is one of sadness one of grief
stolen from heaven by an honest thief
but god sent an angel to my way
to punish me and take it away
i fought him so he made it decay
you hadn`t stood by me so together we couldn`t stay
As much as I loved you No one would do
anything could be false but my love is true
that's one beautiful poem! I like the first lines the most, they relate to alot of people out there :)
i luvd it, its realy a well written poem, i enjoyed readin it keep it up
In so many simple words you have proved at the end that your love is true and not false. A fine composition.
awww... i can relate. this is a beautiful, lovely poem and so very true. thanks for sharing it [3
My heart beat fast towards my breast for your emotions flow with every system in your body and sorely everything can be false but love never compensate a lie
this is a deep poem. I could read it over and over and find new ways to percieve it. :) I like poems that get me thinking
it is amazing how much sorrow one feels when he or she is left alone! Nicely penned here!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very nice! ! flows very well. bravo Tareq