Left Alone

awww... i can relate. this is a beautiful, lovely poem and so very true. thanks for sharing it [3

My heart beat fast towards my breast for your emotions flow with every system in your body and sorely everything can be false but love never compensate a lie

Very nice way to speak of God and living without Him.

this is a deep poem. I could read it over and over and find new ways to percieve it. :) I like poems that get me thinking

it is amazing how much sorrow one feels when he or she is left alone! Nicely penned here!

AS MUCH AS I LOVED YOU NO ONE WOULD DO Eternal utterance of a lover. Fire of love never extinguishes, temporariness simply misguide to skit from the track. It commonly happens due to our nonsatiated thirst for unknown. Written well your intense inclination and use of the metaphor is brilliant. The use of tree with one leaf reminds me a short story of O' Henry. But here its use is different. Honest thief has stolen it where angel also appears to take it away. The leaf is made of sadness and grief.....when it has gone bid it goodbye. Start again from your searching level zero. Thank you. Write more.10/10 Regards, pranab

AS MUCH AS I LOVED YOU NO ONE WOULD DO Eternal utterance of a lover. Fire of love never extinguishes, temporariness simply misguide to skit from the track. It commonly happens due to our nonsatiated thirst for unknown. Written well your intense inclination and use of the metaphor is brilliant. The use of tree with one leaf reminds me a short story of O' Henry. But here its use is different. Honest thief has stolen it where angel also appears to take it away. The leaf is made of sadness and grief.....when it has gone bid it goodbye. Start again from your searching level zero. Thank you. Write more.10/10 Regards, pranab

AS MUCH AS I LOVED YOU NO ONE WOULD DO Eternal utterance of a lover. Fire of love never extinguishes, temporariness simply misguide to skit from the track. It commonly happens due to our nonsatiated thirst for unknown. Written well your intense inclination and use of the metaphor is brilliant. The use of tree with one leaf reminds me a short story of O' Henry. But here its use is different. Honest thief has stolen it where angel also appears to take it away. The leaf is made of sadness and grief.....when it has gone bid it goodbye. Start again from your searching level zero. Thank you. Write more.10/10 Regards, pranab

AS MUCH AS I LOVED YOU NO ONE WOULD DO Eternal utterance of a lover. Fire of love never extinguishes, temporariness simply misguide to skit from the track. It commonly happens due to our nonsatiated thirst for unknown. Written well your intense inclination and use of the metaphor is brilliant. The use of tree with one leaf reminds me a short story of O' Henry. But here its use is different. Honest thief has stolen it where angel also appears to take it away. The leaf is made of sadness and grief.....when it has gone bid it goodbye. Start again from your searching level zero. Thank you. Write more.10/10 Regards, pranab

I like your end-rhyming very well. You did a nice job with it. It is quite the bittersweet poem. Your warning at the beginning is rather frightening. I like your metaphors, you painted quite the scene, a lonely helpless, friendless one. I love the strength of your love, and for that, wish she never had left.

i like the poem, the strength and sorrow at the same time

'Go on and leave me, renounce your belief ', such passion and depth in these words. I enjoyed it very much.