Let Me Keep Floating Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Let Me Keep Floating

Rating: 5.0

Let me keep floating
Like a leaf in a stream
Let me sleep after my work
And breathe smooth and dream

Let me move up and down
Through recesses and plains
Give me wind and a shed to tarry
I will see my town, its streets and lanes

I will go downstream
Till the end and take rest
The sun will eat away my body
Before it slips down and get lost in the west

Anjandev Roy 25 March 2023

Great write.....as always.......thanks a lot...

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 March 2023

Anil this was fabulous Bravo! ! Encore! ! !

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To welcome death, the inevitable, needs a lot of mental preparedness. Nice one, Anilji

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 25 March 2023

First two lines are sweetly poetic. Tfs Anil

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 March 2023

Loved the concept of up and down swing reflected in this wonderful poem. Many poets write good poems but fail to put a catchy title...loved the poem in terms of its title, structure, flow, lovely imagination in creative parlance, and the essence of this magnificent poem in its totality....excellent!

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Richard Wlodarski 28 March 2023

Dr Swain's very positive constructive criticism says it all...does a great service to a magnificent poem. Excellent work, Poet Panda!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 26 March 2023

You poems are so touching and emotional, dear Poet. Loved it. Top marks + to my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 26 March 2023

Let me keep floating like a stream.....sleep and dream.......A wonderful poem dear Anil ji.

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Jayne Louise Davies 26 March 2023

Love this Anil x Another fine poem : )

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Nabakishore Dash 25 March 2023

You want to go far is reflected with beautifully penned poem.

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