Life For The Living Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Life For The Living

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A painful memory
of a time gone by
Slices through my mind
Like a fine cheese wire

Reminding me
That life is for the living

Wednesday, November 16, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: memory
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Phyllis Strong 22 November 2011

Short in words, but straight to the point. 'Life is for the living.' Life is a vapor.

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Cosmic Dreamer 21 November 2011

Your poems are precise and to the point... A very refreshing view of the importance of life and living it... Very nice write...

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Marieta Maglas 21 November 2011

Dave, your poem is amazing and I agree with you''That life is for the living ''-thank you for sharing

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John Mccullagh 20 November 2011

good image using the cheese cutter

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Sajna Kailas 20 November 2011

yes, you are right, ' life is for the living ' very good positive thought!

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James William 31 December 2011

is it true life is for a living i knew it great poem

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Ramesh Rai 29 November 2011

Really, Life is for living. great poem. great thoughts. xlent.

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Len Webster 24 November 2011

Concise. I can almost hear - as well as feel - the slicing!

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Melvin Banggollay 23 November 2011

Short yet vividly speaks the longest essence of life. Great piece brother.

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Smoky Hoss 22 November 2011

Memories, both tough and gentle, are the seeds that grow into hope. Good poem.

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