Life For The Living Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Life For The Living

Rating: 5.0

A painful memory
of a time gone by
Slices through my mind
Like a fine cheese wire

Reminding me
That life is for the living

Phyllis Strong 22 November 2011

Short in words, but straight to the point. 'Life is for the living.' Life is a vapor.

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Cosmic Dreamer 21 November 2011

Your poems are precise and to the point... A very refreshing view of the importance of life and living it... Very nice write...

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Marieta Maglas 21 November 2011

Dave, your poem is amazing and I agree with you''That life is for the living ''-thank you for sharing

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John Mccullagh 20 November 2011

good image using the cheese cutter

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Sajna Kailas 20 November 2011

yes, you are right, ' life is for the living ' very good positive thought!

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James William 31 December 2011

is it true life is for a living i knew it great poem

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Ramesh Rai 29 November 2011

Really, Life is for living. great poem. great thoughts. xlent.

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Len Webster 24 November 2011

Concise. I can almost hear - as well as feel - the slicing!

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Melvin Banggollay 23 November 2011

Short yet vividly speaks the longest essence of life. Great piece brother.

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Smoky Hoss 22 November 2011

Memories, both tough and gentle, are the seeds that grow into hope. Good poem.

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