Life Is A Poem Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Life Is A Poem

Rating: 4.9


It's the same old tale of love and hate,
Energy is the common writer of stories,
Matter is a slave of its probable fate,
One narrates one's efforts for the glories,
The other tells us how one failed and fell,
A bad experience, what else one can tell!

Life is the story of thrilling adventures,
Story of high thinking and super inventions,
Trial and errors, success after many failures,
Revealing all the hidden secrets of creations,
I don't know whether I am a success or a failure,
But I forget all and love to end in a definite allure.

Sweetheart you are poetry and poetry is my love,
I'm one of your million nests where you lay the eggs,
Have a look at the young ones come on dear dove,
The nest is awaiting you can't you fix here your legs?
Teach the beautiful creations how to sing how to fly,
How to smile in the joys and in sadness how to cry!

Friday, November 27, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amir Marandi 27 November 2020

Amazing poem dear master. This resonates with me but in my case, unfortunately grave failures and little successes. " I don't know whether I am a success or a failure, But I forget all and love to end in a definite allure."

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Aarzoo Mehek 27 November 2020

A beautiful poem indeed. The essence of life is so profoundly expressed. Loved reading every bit of it.

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Khairul Ahsan 27 November 2020

'Teach the beautiful creations how to sing how to fly, How to smile in the joys and in sadness how to cry! ' - Loved the concluding lines of the poem, which bring the well articulated poem to an end so beautifully!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 27 November 2020

Beautiful poem. Superb rhyming and great flow. The last two lines really beautiful

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Bill Cantrell 27 November 2020

Brilliant poetry! I throughly enjoyed this true piece of poetry

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2020

Part - 2 success after many failures, / Revealing all the hidden secrets of creations, I don't know whether I am a success or a failure, / But I forget all and love to end in a definite allure. The concluding Stanza is too meaningful and adorable. Many thanks dear Jawad ji for sharing this gem. Five 🌟 (stars.)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2020

Part - 1 Using the words love..hate, life and poetry you have so tactfully and beautifully delineated this poem. The middle Stanza says much about it. Let me cite...Life is the story of thrilling adventures, / Story of high thinking and super inventions, / Trial and errors,

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 December 2020

Life is itself poetry is my love... only a genuine poet can feel so.. beautifully composed sir... appreciated...5 stars

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 December 2020

A well authored poem...... Truly brilliant and marvelous.....5 stars *****

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 December 2020

Life is a poem! A poem full of thrilling adventures, love and hate, errors and success. What i admire the most is: " I don't know whether I am a success or a failure, But I forget all and love to end in a definite allure." A true Poet with a loving soul! There can never be greater Muse than Poetry................ Thank you Akhtar Sahab for this lovely creation........10

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