Life's Path.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Life's Path....

Rating: 4.4


life's path (semita vitae)

if life goes easily,
why must we create problems?
why must we throw stones ahead
if there is none laid?

walk on peacefully
breathe life's fragrance deeply
it is not a sanctuary
at least we can hear the angels sing
though life is not constantly a blinq-blinq....


©Sylvia Frances Chan
Monday 26 August 2019
At 19.21 hrs.PM Dutch Time

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
walk on peacefully
breathe life's fragrance deeply
it is not a sanctuary
at least we can hear the angels sing
though life is not constantly a blinq-blinq....


©Sylvia Frances Chan
Monday 26 August 2019
At 19.21 hrs.PM Dutch Time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 August 2019

Amazing write. The two opening lines alone gripped me to read this marvelous poem. The great Poetess simply built her case on life and turned out to be so significant. Very perceptive and insightful imbued with wisdom.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 August 2019

I am deeply touched by the gorgeous responses, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin. Do I deserve all these? Thank you so much for these precious comments, and valuable responses, also your caring and loving compliments. God Bless in abundance You and your beloved family.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2019

Life's path is tender. Life is precious. There is no need to create problems for life or there is no need to be worried for the troubles we get. Life is very smooth and it moves beautifully. In a scented, scenic and breathy way we should walk ever. Constantly we should hear the beautiful breath of life. This is an excellent poem ans we appreciate your effort of penning this...10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 November 2019

Thank you so much for the most engaging way you complimented. It is like the rising sun, the rays must grt out, they must be spread and what a brightest light they are! Thank you so very much dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir, your compliments in the appreciations for my poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 November 2019

Thank you so much for the 10 Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir! God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved épousse. Amen.

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Nabakishore Dash 05 December 2021

A very good advice from a great poetess.Grateful to u Mam.

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 September 2019

walk on peacefully breathe life's fragrance deeply it is not a sanctuary...///beautiful writings

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 August 2019

Brilliant write, life by nature goes easily unless... yet, nor we walk peacefully, nor yet breathe the fragrance deeply..

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Akhtar Jawad 31 August 2019

Be a source of peace for others and pass a peaceful life and if in life you are ever restless, think when and how and whom you made restless. A great poem by a great poetess with a great message having universal appeal.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 August 2019

Walking peacefully with love, i can hear the angels sing.... :) Beautiful Poem, dear Poetess Sylvia......10

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