Light Sound Camera Action Poem by ramesh rai

Light Sound Camera Action

Rating: 5.0


Light!

Sound!

Camera!

Action!

Cut! Cut!

Retake

but in real life
there is no retake
each shot is final

each scene is captured
by universal camera
entire nature is audience
God is judge
to declare
best actor
best actoress
best villian
best comedian
and so on

there is no rehearsal
no retake
so ensure
each shot
best shot

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tribhawan Kaul 06 August 2013

Great poem. There are definitely no retakes in life which enacts itself on the stage of this universe. Happy writing.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 August 2013

There is no rehearsal, there is no retake in real life. Beautiful poem.

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Hazel Durham 05 August 2013

All we can do is try our best and when we don't to not carry our mistakes around, to let go and to find happiness within our hearts! Original and beautiful write!

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Elena Sandu 05 August 2013

True. Wish I could do my best for each moment of my life... unfortunately most of the time fail, than I spend a while trying to patch each hole. Sometimes, (rarely) I manage to have a beautiful clad. Wish any of us to be forgiven, and given a second chance, as maybe we need to learn from own mistakes.

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Shahzia Batool 04 August 2013

a further step and a modern re-interpretation of the great universal analogy of the world as a Stage given by Shakespeare in All the world is a stage! ! !

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Brian Jani 29 June 2014

nice poem man life is a camera.no retakes ever.

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David Wood 12 August 2013

Very true words, in real life there is no retake.

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Heather Wilkins 10 August 2013

in real life there is no retake. so we must try to get it right the first time. excellent write

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 August 2013

Beautiful write...In real life not retake...Well written. Loved reading it.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 07 August 2013

Very beautiful poem both in content and form.

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