Tiku akp


Like The Cool Breeze - Poem by Tiku akp

Like the cool breeze form the sea
You touch my heart and mind
You caress my body to sooth me
Thanks very much being so kind

Like the sweet song a bird sings
In your gait I can hear a tune
You are the spring in my life
Thanks very much being a boon

Like majestic formation of clouds
You infuse varied dreams in to me
You are the rainbow in my life
Thanks very much making me free

Like a virgin stream across a dale
You flow into my life in peace
You are the flower I am the bee
Thanks very much for eternal bliss

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about Like The Cool Breeze by Tiku akp

  • Parameswaran Nair Damodaran NairParameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair (12/2/2019 7:38:00 AM)

    It's of course a meaningful poem. To my poem list. A belated felicitation is felt better than to skip congratulating (Report)Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (5/2/2019 6:51:00 AM)

    WOW! On the 29th of October submitted and on the 3rd of November chosen as Member Poem Of The Day, Hurray! CONGRATULATIONS being selected as Member Poem Of The Day, dear Tiku, loveliest worded and so perfectly said. Marvelous poem, I have enjoyed reading this time and again. Truly engaging. God´s Blessings.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Dave Walker (11/4/2018 7:00:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem, when peace flows into us it makes for a blissful life. (Report)Reply

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  • Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (11/4/2018 3:42:00 AM)

    Very well crafted with beautiful words.....Really outstanding.........thanks for sharing......10+++++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (11/3/2018 11:21:00 PM)

    its beautiful poem and written beautifully (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (11/3/2018 10:32:00 PM)

    An elegant piece of work! Many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as POD! (10) (Report)Reply

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  • SYLVA-ONYEMA UBA (11/3/2018 7:06:00 PM)

    Like the sweet song a bird sing

    Good alliterative device.
    Nice and melodic.
    Well done!
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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (11/3/2018 5:07:00 PM)

    A marvelous poem that brings out the beauty and wonders
    of nature and the joy that it gives to mankind.
    Well crafted write.
    Congratulations !
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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (11/3/2018 3:50:00 PM)

    Like a virgin stream! !

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Rini ShibuRini Shibu (11/3/2018 12:05:00 PM)

    Congratulations for poem of the day..beautifully penned 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Benjamin Uy (11/3/2018 11:10:00 AM)

    You have created a great poem
    Thanks for these inspiring stanzas,
    Yours truly
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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (11/3/2018 9:23:00 AM)

    Thanks Poem Hunter for selecting this poem as the POD. Thanks everyone for reading and comment. Gratitude. (Report)Reply

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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (11/3/2018 6:46:00 AM)

    A beautifully crafted poem. Congrats on Poem of the Day. (Report)Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/3/2018 5:46:00 AM)

    CONGRATS, Got the opportunity to read again this wonderful poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Geeta Radhakrishna MenonGeeta Radhakrishna Menon (11/3/2018 5:02:00 AM)

    You are the flower I am the bee
    Thanks very much for eternal bliss

    Tiku ji, this is a wonderful poem of such a positive assertion of a wonderful life.
    Heartiest Congratulations dear Poet. So happy to see you as the poet of the day....10
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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (11/3/2018 4:14:00 AM)

    Life is enjoyable in this earth for the gift of Almighty above. The cool breeze from the sea, sweet songs of the birds, majestic formation of clouds, and virgin stream across a dale are some of his gifts those give us pleasure and peace. A beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day. (Report)Reply

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  • Nadia Umber LodhiNadia Umber Lodhi (11/3/2018 3:58:00 AM)

    Thanks very much being so kind
    .....nice
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  • Adrian FlettAdrian Flett (11/3/2018 3:51:00 AM)

    Like the cool breeze from(form?) the sea. There are some forced rhymes which disturb the rhythm of the poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati NayakBharati Nayak (11/3/2018 12:35:00 AM)

    Like majestic formation of clouds
    You infuse varied dreams in to me
    You are the rainbow in my life
    Thanks very much making me free- - - - - Love is both divine and earthly.It is felt in nature and in the heart.A wonderful poem of love, thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day !
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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (11/3/2018 12:12:00 AM)

    Tiku, such a lovely poem, ..10+++++++++++++ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 29, 2018



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