Limerick.16. Sour Grapes Poem by Valsa George

Ha Ha Ha.... very intelligently defended the negation. So nice! ! !

A fine satire which spreads my lips

There are two more years to try. Nice Limerick.

If only you wish I am not keen......fantastic write........I loved it so much.......thanks for sharing.....Valsa

Beautiful poem Valsa. What a beautiful and humble way of telling... He quipped- If only you wish, I am not keen This is really fantastic. Dinesh Sir comment quiet interesting....Smiles...

He asked-'Can we dance' She curtly said 'No chance'......He quipped- 'If you wish, I amn't keen'.....amusing expression. Brilliant Limirick. Enjoyed.

Haha... the old man has a last laugh... i wonder how the teen girl feels

you garnered (a word i 'never' use) some fine comments, especially the ones i considered clever. i especially liked the one from Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/14/2014) . i believe this IS a limerick. not bad. of course i could do better! :) :) thanks for sharing. you are one of my favorites, Valsa. but you already know that. :) bri - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - p.s. i might add: He persisted: My sweet, shall we then go to bed? , to which she replied, NO! old man. Go drop DEAD! But he stopped NOT his attempts to woo the cute girl, saying Come now, my young lady, give me a whirl.

Hahaha! enjoyed the poem. Very witty.

avoidance with negation and the heading sour grapes by fox a fox call - If only you wish, I am not keen thanks