Limerick.17. Bragging Poem by Valsa George

Limerick.17. Bragging

Rating: 5.0


By bragging he could lift even a ton,
Everyone he wanted to stun.
Attempting to lift the weight,
Oops…he lost his gait.
Flat under the load, he moaned, "I am done"

Friday, August 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: fall
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 29 August 2014

hahaha, a great one, can picture it.

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Savita Tyagi 29 August 2014

Lol! Good one. Thanks for the laughs.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 29 August 2014

Very funny indeed......Valsa.....It made me laugh under the load.....Subject serious or humorous you are the best

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 August 2014

What a relief to read one to laugh and laugh.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 August 2014

His bragging, trying and ultimately moaning is funny, probably he tried to entertain all of us.

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Kesav Easwaran 03 March 2020

Nice well constructed limerick.10+

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Bri Edwards 06 February 2019

nice, except gait threw me aka 'made me wonder'. one ton? that's all? ? my ice cream spoon [an antique steam shovel] shovels that much into my mouth every second when i really get hungry. bri (:

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 April 2018

You have very brilliant thought to express who wants to stunt and lift the weight. When every one falls down this amazes mind. This Limerick is really very fun giving. An amazing sharing is done here...10

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Loke Kok Yee 06 October 2015

Whenever I need a laugh, I can always rely on your limericks! Thanks Valsa.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2014

Lol...Wonderful Limerick Valsa. Something to refresh among the loads of ton.......Loved it.

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