Limerick - 31 - Fall Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Limerick - 31 - Fall

Rating: 4.8


Once Michel threw Liza a ball
It hit her torso she did call
Wow, ‘Do you mean me doll? '
He laughed at and said ‘a mall'
Soon a ball hit him and made him fall.

Thursday, July 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: fun,humor
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 13 July 2019

Limericks are funny, and when come from unexpected quarters, are more so. Here is one. Came the ball making me fall as well.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2019

Wall of the mall! Ball over the wall! A call behind you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 12 July 2019

The limerick takes me back to childhood days when we were teasing friends and throwing ball at each other. A nice limerick, thanks for sharing.

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Prabir Gayen 12 July 2019

Beautiful Limerick..... sweetly written..///

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Sekharan Pookkat 13 July 2019

so funny -enjoyed it sir-we will laugh when others slips- thans for sharing

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Irfanulla Shariff 07 September 2019

Awesome limerick...enjoyed reading it. Nicely penned!

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M Asim Nehal 31 August 2019

Wonderful, humorous limerick. I enjoyed reading it.

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Liza Sudina 29 August 2019

Made me smile. Thanks!

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Anjandev Roy 28 August 2019

Great humour. Enjoyed it. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Rebecca Navarre 20 August 2019

Awesome humor! .. Vivid imagery! .. Ever so nice too, to see an occasional poem that brings laughter to hearts and joy into this world! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .......................+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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