Limerick.32.Glutton Poem by Valsa George

Limerick.32.Glutton

Rating: 5.0


On the lad, they had put all the blame
He hung his head in shame
He was called a glutton
For gobbling some mutton
Poor lad, this was all that was his crime

Monday, May 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Elders hide their inner feelings. He is a boy who displays his true feeling. Nice limerick to say it is not a crime.

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Akhtar Jawad 18 May 2015

Every poet is is a glutton, always engaged in gobbling new thoughts and digesting it as an inspiration to create the energy of poetry.

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Again another good one. Well rhymed.

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Hazel Durham 19 May 2015

Entertaining write with great rhyming!

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 May 2015

Poor lad so innocent that he cannot hide his feelings. No one looked at his innocence, but everyone blamed him as if he committed some crime. Another beautiful poem Valsa. Loved it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2020

One can't control hunger. Poor lad has done so. Is it his crime? This poem is composed in a humours way. Beautifully executed. Five stars.

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The glaring Limerick points to the poverty of the and hunger of the small boy to whom the flavour of the dish might have been a temptation. The significance is that you have made it a super Limerick as charming as the taste of the dish...10

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 January 2020

eat drink, be merry, world is full of variety don't harm other just live in legitimacy let them tell you are glutton earn true, survive with no swoon eat to live, live to eat, no problem, truth is free

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M Asim Nehal 30 January 2019

Poor fellow, there is no control over hunger. A nice limerick to sum up.

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Mihaela Pirjol 14 May 2018

This limerick put a smile on my face! Wonderfully composed!

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