Limerick R55 (Sixty Plus) Poem by Rajnish Manga

Limerick R55 (Sixty Plus)

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Those of you who are sixty plus;
May find it difficult to board a bus;

Take from bank a personal loan,
Purchase with it a sturdy drone,

So as to commute without a fuss.

Saturday, December 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: loan,old age ,poem,sixties,travel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 December 2018

When you are sixty and above, you enter into phase of freedom or as Shakespeare says into second childhood It is a good time, when you begin to enjoy life with ease and lesser responsibilities. Right Rajnish ji, there is nothing to fuss about.

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Rajnish Manga 27 December 2018

Thanks a lot, Geeta ji. I'm extremely pleased to have this humble poem reviewed by you so thoughtfully. Shakespeare and you both are right when dwelling on old age. Incidentally, long back, my father fell on the road while de-boarding a bus and got serious injuries. He could not recover from the impact. Today, we observe his 27th death anniversary.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 December 2018

Growing up along the paths of life! ! Growing old. Dedicated to 60 Plus! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kesav Easwaran 26 January 2019

Nice well written Limerick.

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Hans Vr 19 January 2019

Very good limerick. Funny and superbly well written.

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Rajnish Manga 19 January 2019

I'm grateful to you for your kind words of appreciation, Dear Friend.

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Savita Tyagi 08 January 2019

haha so much more is difficult after sixty. Its battle of will. What to pick and what to leave.Great limerick.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 January 2019

DIL TtARASSS GAYAA APKEE AWAAJ NOT ABLE TO LISTEN DEAF POET WHO CARES - -should not be your admission do read my A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR'S POEM ANGELS 2018 MEANT ALSO FOR YOU AND OH BELOVED just posted Yes if time is available to/with u

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Muzahidul Reza 02 January 2019

Take from bank a personal loan, Purchase with it a sturdy drone, laughing point of view, thanks for sharing

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Rajnish Manga 02 January 2019

It's always a pleasure to read your comments. Thanks, Dear Friend, for a positive feedback.

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