Limerick- Snoring Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- Snoring

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Late he got back home distraught
And fell asleep on his cot
Soon he began to snore
Like the waves that roar
His wife woke up as if from a gun shot

Limerick- Snoring
Thursday, August 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 10 August 2017

Hahaha. Very witty. Thanx for making us laugh.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 August 2017

Helpless husband, what he could do if he had problems in his nostrills. Enjoyed it as fun.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 August 2017

His wife woke up as if from a gun shot... ha... ha... ha... funny realy. It is beautiful limerick full of humour.

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Savita Tyagi 14 August 2017

Hahaha! We all know the feeling!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 16 August 2017

Snorer knows not what snoring and its effects are. He needs a wake up call I think.

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Soran M. H 18 August 2020

Like the waves that roar His wife woke up as if from a gun shot

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Soran M. H 18 August 2020

Hello and thanks, this condition is a big problem for many people nowadays, but here our great and talented poet managed to address the issue very poetically, by showing the comic side of it, well done and have a big 10++ and onto my fav list

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Mj Lemon 09 January 2019

A domestic war! Peace no more! This is brilliant Valsa, to myfavourites.

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Bri Edwards 16 November 2017

is this the way YOU would punctuate? ? ? ? Late he got back home distraught And fell asleep on his cot. (or ;) Soon he began to snore. Like the waves that roar, His wife woke up as if from a gun shot. i like it. to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 September 2017

Ha Ha......Interesting Limerick on snoring. Loved it.

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