Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Lines Of Success

Essence holds its dream entire,
Strengthens hope true into fire
To fit in it to be higher
To the most breezed to aspire.

Its strength with a wind-lot by,
Sprouts ambition to the sky
To bloom into a smile high.
Happiness across to fly,

Its fluttering wings in flight
Spreads across the field its light.
Blossomed is success glass-bright
With glory mounting in sight.

Heart content is in sublime,
Remains diamond-worth in prime.
Victory does reign in clime,
Hailing joy bell-like to chime.

Poem Submitted: Friday, May 1, 2009
Poem Edited: Saturday, October 10, 2009

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (3/28/2019 5:25:00 PM)

    Essence of dream holds message of success. This poem is very brilliantly penned. This is an excellent sharing done here...10

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  • Abhishek Dabgotra (5/17/2018 10:38:00 AM)

    Nice poem

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  • Momin taiba (11/27/2017 10:23:00 AM)

    Awsm poem....😚😚I loved it

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  • Sivashanmugam ShanmugamSivashanmugam Shanmugam (5/5/2012 6:12:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem.....very beautiful rhythm...

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  • Kieran J96 (5/11/2010 9:28:00 AM)

    this is agreat poem that expresses the hopes and dreams of many. as previously said you have a gre4at rhyming scheme.
    great poem

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  • Elaine Oxamendi Vicet (2/28/2010 5:23:00 PM)

    I like it a lot..I am sharing with my friends on facebook.

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  • Arshia Khattak (2/17/2010 10:15:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem.....really touches one's heart! keep writing

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  • Biff Jeffries (10/25/2009 11:59:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. Your poem chronicles the upward journey of hopes and dreams, and the elusive path of success. Great ryhme scheme.

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  • Aubrey silverAubrey silver (10/21/2009 12:30:00 PM)

    i loved the rhyme schem it was wonderful you are indeed vary talented

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  • Jennifer Wilson (10/19/2009 2:23:00 PM)

    WOW! It was a treat to read your poem. I really enjoyed it! 10 definately!

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  • Nikunj Sharma (10/16/2009 3:29:00 AM)

    musical and mystical..........treat for eyes and heart........good poem

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  • Omar Ibrahim (10/16/2009 2:40:00 AM)

    increadibly stunnig! ! ! ! wonderful rhymes! ! ! keep writing and tell me once you write anything! ! ! 10++++++++++++

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  • Prince Obed de la CruzPrince Obed de la Cruz (10/12/2009 8:49:00 PM)

    the poem is wonderful! The last vowels in every line is ' i ' and only few poems that i have read kept a single pattern to the entire poem!

    Very well penned!

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  • Maria C. Pires CostaMaria C. Pires Costa (10/12/2009 2:01:00 PM)

    Hello Obinna K. Eruchie,

    Success is not always achieved so easily as you have nicely penned your poem!
    But... keeping motivation, ambition, along with dedication, responsibility and work you can make it happen!
    Thanks for sharing.

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  • Chitra - (10/11/2009 9:34:00 AM)

    beyond the materiatlistic meaning of success, into the realms of pure heartfelt success...well drawn lines...well done

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  • Swatimalya Chattopadhyay (10/11/2009 8:43:00 AM)

    Dream triggers the ambition and keeping the ambition in view if we strive hard in a focussed way, success will never elude us.It is said ' Nothing succeeds like success.'The amount of happiness we derive from success is immeasurable.
    Brilliant thought penned beautifully.

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (10/10/2009 12:33:00 PM)

    Oh what rhymes bro...lines jam packed with meaning..expressed it a rhythmic form you could almost dance to.....nicely expressed bro....One of your finest - for rhyme...............great work 10++

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  • Surya . (10/10/2009 11:30:00 AM)

    beautiful and meaningful poem.lasit para is wonderful.
    'Heart content in sublime,
    Remains diamond-worth in prime.
    Victory does reign in clime,
    Hailing joy bell-like to chime'
    voted10
    surya

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  • Henry Brown (10/10/2009 10:20:00 AM)

    Mmmmmmm.......as usual with your poems it gives food for thought

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  • Marcella D (10/10/2009 8:19:00 AM)

    hm very intersting poem you have here

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