Agile ants building colonies
Busy bees buzzing honey hives
Beetle bugs grinding green leaves
Brown butterflies feasting on flowers
Crawling caterpillars sticking under reefs
Energetic earthworms easing into sand and soil
Freaky frogs making croaking sounds
Green grasshoppers hopping plant to plant
Lengthy leeches racing here and there
Mystery millipedes moving in millimeters
Steady snails sneaking into shells
Spirited spiders weaving cobwebs
All these wonderful species
Adorn my garden
A little kingdom, altogether!
Some nice imagery used and with such a brief insight it asks for more expansion. Well versed overall.
Unfortunately many city dwellers are locked and jailed between concrete floors in cramped Flat, unable to see even sun at anytime in a day. They can at least enjoy this poem. Nice kingdom. Convey my best wishes to the subjects of your little kingdom.
that was a lovely little kingdom that you created with your verse! keep it up!
a wonderful poem, a nice descriptions of a world most don't pay mind to
Your kind of poetry i like, just take ur pen n paper and write on whatever interesting you see around you, not whatever you feel within you... Great poet :)
Vijay, First of all thank you for inviting me to read this piece, it really is a wonderful and truthful way of expressing the realisation that your garden is truly a little kingdom, as much goes on in it as in our own human part of this planet and you have expressed it marvellously in your writing. Great work and I will be adding you to my friends list now to see what else your pen creates Peace Jon
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well written with the beginning of the alphabet orders in every stanza.10+