Little Kingdom Poem by Vijay Sai R

Little Kingdom

Rating: 4.3


Agile ants building colonies
Busy bees buzzing honey hives
Beetle bugs grinding green leaves
Brown butterflies feasting on flowers
Crawling caterpillars sticking under reefs
Energetic earthworms easing into sand and soil
Freaky frogs making croaking sounds
Green grasshoppers hopping plant to plant
Lengthy leeches racing here and there
Mystery millipedes moving in millimeters
Steady snails sneaking into shells
Spirited spiders weaving cobwebs
All these wonderful species
Adorn my garden
A little kingdom, altogether!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Well written with the beginning of the alphabet orders in every stanza.10+

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Louis Cecile 28 July 2012

Some nice imagery used and with such a brief insight it asks for more expansion. Well versed overall.

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Gan Chennai 24 May 2010

Unfortunately many city dwellers are locked and jailed between concrete floors in cramped Flat, unable to see even sun at anytime in a day. They can at least enjoy this poem. Nice kingdom. Convey my best wishes to the subjects of your little kingdom.

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Pamela Lutwyche 16 May 2010

Your kingdom sounds a very Interesting place to be.

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Nithya Raghavan 10 March 2010

that was a lovely little kingdom that you created with your verse! keep it up!

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Deondra Yeboah 23 May 2021

its cool for me, because I love minibeast!

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Kelvin Owusu 03 December 2012

a wonderful poem, a nice descriptions of a world most don't pay mind to

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Terry O'leary 04 November 2012

Beautiful description of the 'underworld'... Terry

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Frank Okoth 27 August 2012

Your kind of poetry i like, just take ur pen n paper and write on whatever interesting you see around you, not whatever you feel within you... Great poet :)

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Jon Terry 28 July 2012

Vijay, First of all thank you for inviting me to read this piece, it really is a wonderful and truthful way of expressing the realisation that your garden is truly a little kingdom, as much goes on in it as in our own human part of this planet and you have expressed it marvellously in your writing. Great work and I will be adding you to my friends list now to see what else your pen creates Peace Jon

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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