Looking Through The Window Poem by Ernestine Northover

Looking Through The Window

Rating: 4.6


The waiting room was empty
when she entered through the door,
The train whistle reminded her,
of what she was here for.
Another fifteen minutes
until his train came in,
And would he recognise her,
her head was in a spin.
For it was simply ages
since she'd looked into his eyes,
And looking through the window,
saw the same blue in the skies.
Perhaps she shouldn't be here,
her husband she'd betray,
So with tears descending down her face,
she slowly walked away.

© Ernestine Northover

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tailor Bell 17 September 2006

mesmerizingly wonderful, Ernestine. may not be such an easy read for some. romantic piece. -Tailor

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 September 2006

Poetess E...Consummate loyalty is a rare virtue for Todays relationships...There should be far more empty train stations of people that should be with the one they pledged to....Sterling Write, my dear, as always...as if i expected any less''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Francesca Johnson 17 September 2006

Another compulsive read from a great poet. The ending made the poem. I just loved the whole thing........ Love, Fran xx

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Sidi Mahtrow 17 September 2006

Well before we jump to conclusions: Her 'husband to betray' Could it have been that he sent her To meet an old friend and she thought not. So much for romantics. s

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nn mn 17 September 2006

' Looking Through The Window' - Is this what they mean about 'window pane'?

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Andrew Blakemore 29 July 2008

Very like a heartbreaking scene from an old black and white film. A very beautiful and moving piece. Love, Andrew xx

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Esther Leclerc 29 September 2006

Yes, reminds me of that movie classic, with Trevor Howard... mmm, can't remember, just remade too... Only, she didn't walk away. A truthful portrayal of love's tug-of-war with responsibility.

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Brian Dorn 24 September 2006

A classic write, Ernestine... simply pure poetry! Brian

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 19 September 2006

Oh Ernestine... so sweetly sad

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Duncan Wyllie 18 September 2006

Awww! so moving Ernestine, you share the gift of a keen eye and a wonderful insight Love duncan X

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