Lost An Eye? Poem by Kim Barney
Lost An Eye?
I wanted to write a poem with a simile,
and tried for a long while.
Somewhere, somehow, it lost an 'i'
and all I had left was a smile.
Your loss is someone's catch, see how well Bri caught your words. Always witty and wise.
And then if I lost the other 'i' and the 'l', all that would be left is ME!
Thanks, Smoky. Any time I can make someone smile, it has been a good day for me.
Yes, the English language really is fun, and so is your five-star poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 10:35:22 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I love it when intelligent writers play with words-tossing them about like colorful balloons and playing dodge-ball with other quick-minded writers! please, don't ever lose your playfullness!
Susan, thank you so much for your always witty comments. It's people like you that keep me coming back to this once-much-better website.