Lost From Your Grasp Poem by Unwritten Soul
Lost From Your Grasp
Remember me?
In your promise
A little warm castle
Made of sweet time
Built for me to live
Between your hands
And i forever at the center
Protected as long as i still here
Remember those promise dear?
I know that it maybe NO,
But i still thankful
I was just the snowy ice
That never felt so warm before
And you shared me once to let me know
Changed, melted my soul as the water flow
Through your loosen fingers like the opened windows
You let me go
Gone and disappeared
Stolen by the cold air
By the ropes of sunlight hair
Remember you?
How cant I?
Because I promised once
Even though I've been forgotten
I still around you to support anytime
And when clouds sending me back, i returned
Fallen and buried underneath your garden
I know that you maybe don't know
The flowers in your jars that bloom
Because of me give my life into them
Water, my strength in them
So you still have me
Your eyes can't see me
But i am here
Though the last promise
Have been forgotten
And I still here
Here
Just I cant be yours
To live in your grasp
Just not as what in your promise
But here i am again
Forgiving
Beautiful poem with a great message to forgive...Loved reading each lines....Loved it.
Wow! .. This poem is superb my friend, it melts the heart of the reader. Siya_! !
its phnomenol, a 10 for it. loved reading it. But here i am again Forgiving amazing lines. please read some of mine. :)
Just I cant be yours To live in your grasp Just not as what in your promise But here i am again Forgiving........touching expression with nice theme. In the long run of time relationship become fade and loose from the grasp. A brilliant poem shared startlingly.10
This poem has a remarkable quality. There is a suggestion that a relationship of a lifetime can slowly fall away from the grasp....like a fistful of sand. The tighter we hold and cling, the more is lost. Simply doing nothing will not prevent the drift, but it can slow it down. In time, all is lost. What remains is the memory....which is so unlike those grains of sand. A remarkable poem, Soul.
Your kindness and sweetness really a great gift i ever have from friends. Thank you :)
I love your choice of words... 'Remember me? In your promise A little warm castle Made of sweet time Built for me to live Between your hands' Beautiful...10
beautiful poetry... still searching for myself to be able to do so.... nice to read in others words to describe oneself feels... emotions are universal....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A beautiful poem has come out from your 'doodling' of words and thoughts. The theme is nice. The message of unconditional forgiveness is great! Hands that water the plants may not be there, but the plants do gratefully remember the favour. This part touched me. When my wife is away from home, I look at the plants and wonder how much care she took of them to keep them alive! Great to see so many comments here. I applaud each and everyone of them for sharing their nice thoughts.