Unwritten Soul


Lost - Poem by Unwritten Soul

We lost our words
Something has gone
Something unplanned
But who are we
To stop what we cant

Where's the warm greet
Only silent wash our feet
Draw a distance
Me...Away from you
The sign you point it

Nobody guilty
The broken occur naturally
Unintentionally

We lost our grip
like we are two ships
Lost in stormy seas
Wind drew destiny
Reach different harbour

Our lips silence sealed
We walk together but
In two different dimensions
At two different directions
Without a word left
Without any regret
Decision was made
As you want it
A while or Or..
Or maybe we lost it all?

You cant deny
Our life got infected
Bruises consume the strength
You hold me loosely
To lost me slowly

The soul ruptured
The spirit folded
It's all right
Promise me
Blooming smiles forever
Cheer a bud of flower
Make it eternal

Take your way
If that make u feel better
Time will flows like a river
And you will forget me later
Waves, pull me away
Send me to a new land
Where i cant make people hurt

Sweet little sacrifice
For me to you
You
Lost
Me
For your sake

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Hmm seems like many readers give sign not like to read this kind from me
lol...hey dont worry it's a writing....I'm not broken..: p


Comments about Lost by Unwritten Soul

  • (7/13/2017 4:53:00 PM)


    Intense piece of work.
    Heartbreaking- -though beautifully conveyed.
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  • (7/10/2017 3:54:00 AM)


    Your kind soul is beautifully reflected in this pensive poem. Another great write! (Report) Reply

  • (7/8/2017 5:10:00 PM)


    This is terrific, Soul. I read this several times, and noticed the very last word in the first stanza. I now see it can be from to cant. A reading with this understanding adds a twinge of melancholy. A great work, Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Simone Inez Harriman (6/12/2017 5:32:00 AM)


    To be lost in a relationship is a terribly sad situation. What to say...What to do....How to fix.....To stay or leave. Another stunning write...10+ (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (6/13/2017 6:04:00 AM)

    When we are lost, we have to calm down and know always where to go back home and respect our own life, Thank you Simone for always reading my work..appreciate that my dear

  • Agatha Eliza (12/13/2016 5:08:00 AM)


    I read a couple of the poems you posted here...I really enjoyed them. Well, of course, I must admit some really did strike a chord. The poem is great; is depicts all the feelings one goes through after a break up, and eventually the distance, serenity, acceptance and sacrifice that go along with it. I rated it a 10! (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (12/13/2016 5:31:00 AM)

    Thanks Agatha, really appreciate your kind words and kindness on my work and to me..you too have a golden pen in your hands, just keep the golden ink writing something! :)

  • Muzahidul Reza (11/19/2016 5:28:00 AM)

    Lost
    Where's the warm greet
    Only silent wash our feet
    Draw a distance
    Me...Away from you
    The sign you point it

    Excellently written, in desert many of us lose ourselves, desert may be in us or out of us, great poem, thank you for sharing it with us, +++++++ 10
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  • Rebecca Navarre (11/3/2016 12:33:00 AM)


    p/s .. As Always! ! ! ..... inconcerns to my last sentance. (Report) Reply

  • Rebecca Navarre (11/3/2016 12:23:00 AM)


    Strikes My heart as I flash back in time! Such Sad Poem And So Well
    Written as you Captured The Feeling To Paper Excellently! ! ! Afraid we've
    all felt that, but gotta Hope things of such come about for a reason, of better we,
    just don't know it yet or at the time... Love Your Writings! ! ! ! SO Touching! ! ! ! ! Look
    Forward To Next! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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  • Christopher Tye (7/25/2016 6:11:00 AM)


    Great poem, life can be a torturous path but in time all things become apparent. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (7/25/2016 7:27:00 AM)

    Thanks Chris, i almost not have in my mind and forget that i wrote this poem.. :)

  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/12/2016 7:53:00 AM)


    Lost in stormy seas! ! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Ruby Honeytip (12/4/2012 5:45:00 AM)


    Great writing! Glad it is only that and you are happily intact: -) (Report) Reply

  • (9/14/2011 1:01:00 PM)


    Good poem my friend. We are all lost at some
    Point in are lives. And thank you for your kind
    Words on my poems.
    Best wishes

    Dave
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 26, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 25, 2011


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