Lost Soul Poem by Asif Baloch

Lost Soul

Rating: 5.0


Pierced my heart
Rhymes thus I wrote
Love and loneliness
On the tide of thoughts tho float

Trembling like a leaf
Ready to fall
Falling like this
Never to rise
Floating in the winds
Of sorrows and denials
Thinking with the heart
Brain is froze

Yearns and sighs
Filled in the air
Waving like a blind
For hand to hold
Crying like a child
For motherly love
Forgot the reality
I’m aging old

I never have accomplished
Anything in this life
Thinking like a fool that
He might, put the time on hold
Pleading and crying
Wondering in the mist
I’m the one they call
Miserable, lost soul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Egi David Perdana 30 November 2008

dramatic rain with raindropp memories

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Seema Chowdhury 29 November 2008

good wordings....but as always i will terll you not to call yourself a lost soul. just know its a passing phase that will go away soon............ trust me. and always know when you think from your heart you will never fail. hearts always leads you to your destintion.

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Reshma Ramesh 29 November 2008

hmmmmmmm good write......

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 November 2008

Bhayya! I can mimpathize ur pain. I know how bad feeling it is. Ur poems are enamouring with then depth and sincerity of expression..........10(too less)

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Dr Kamran Haider 28 November 2008

Dear Brother, you are in transition of losing yourself and will regain it soon... This is what is a pre-requisite in the process of reincarnation of our lost souls... Beautifully written with sincerity of words and thought... Thanks for sharing...

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Great poem my friend as I never such imagery and creativity like this...thank you 10/10

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Yaseen Anwer 12 December 2008

Hey bro u r amazing matured stroke by pen with wonderful contruction.. Regards Yaseen Anwer

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Gargi Saha 09 December 2008

A wonderful poem. u get 10++..............

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Naru Kaede 09 December 2008

Wow, wonderful Aijaz.. Always in sadness... But keep in happy, but what God plans it's never known, This writes, just remembered me of something, Love this one, my dear friends, Wish happy in you, always, Naru Kaede,

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Omar Ali Sabar 08 December 2008

What you have acclomplished is a wonderful poem sir...10/10

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