Love Poem by Dr Dillip K Swain

Love

Rating: 4.6


Your sterling love
Is like a gigantic sponge
That absorbs the fountain of my pain
Soaking it invisibly, awakening my soul
To withstand violent storms
Cyclonic waves and all disasters
Prompting me to climb mammoth hills
Sans soreness, pains and perils

It's your pure love
That sparks emotion
For - I dive into the ocean!

Copyright @Poet,25 January,2019

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 December 2022

Love is like a gigantic sponge.....Wow! Marvellous poem on Love Dillip ji......Top score and to my favourite

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Beautiful poem. A true to life depiction of love. Inimitable metaphors and tropes make this short poem exquisite. Top score and Myfavourites

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Nabakishore Dash 14 December 2022

Fantastic idea in the poem reveals love is the best winner.Enjoyed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 December 2022

Dear @Poet, amazing poem is this, excellently worded and brilliantly composed. TOP Stars. Enjoyed tremendously.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 25 December 2022

Indulge in repeated dives. Enjoyed reading your diving piece

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Rob Lamberton 09 September 2023

An ocean of enabling love, such an abundant reality worth daily contemplation. Love is what sustains our very life! !

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Well penned poem on love.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 03 June 2023

A gorgeous poem! It is in my favorites.

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David Wood 29 May 2023

Beautiful poem, there's nothing like, or better than true love. Top marks.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 29 April 2023

Good diving. Into a pool of love

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