Your sterling love
Is like a gigantic sponge
That absorbs the fountain of my pain
Soaking it invisibly, awakening my soul
To withstand violent storms
Cyclonic waves and all disasters
Prompting me to climb mammoth hills
Sans soreness, pains and perils
It's your pure love
That sparks emotion
For - I dive into the ocean!
Copyright @Poet,25 January,2019
Beautiful poem. A true to life depiction of love. Inimitable metaphors and tropes make this short poem exquisite. Top score and Myfavourites
Fantastic idea in the poem reveals love is the best winner.Enjoyed.
Dear @Poet, amazing poem is this, excellently worded and brilliantly composed. TOP Stars. Enjoyed tremendously.
Indulge in repeated dives. Enjoyed reading your diving piece
An ocean of enabling love, such an abundant reality worth daily contemplation. Love is what sustains our very life! !
Beautiful poem, there's nothing like, or better than true love. Top marks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love is like a gigantic sponge.....Wow! Marvellous poem on Love Dillip ji......Top score and to my favourite