Sparrow's Orchestra Poem by Dr Dillip K Swain

Sparrow's Orchestra

Rating: 4.6


She comes out to sing
to express happiness
from her house of
paper, straw and grasses
cheeps cheeps voice
as like as nightingale's
loud whistling crescendo.
Awakens my dreary senses
in a chorus with cuckoos
and breeze ruffling eucalyptus
scripting splendid melody
in a concert sublime and holy.

It's a blameless sparrow
flying from boughs to boughs
in lightening flaps of wings
awakening petals of flowers
to emit engaging fragrances
and pulsating their senses
cheeps…cheeps, voice delicious
and melody harmonious
to enjoy rapturous serenity
in utter tranquility.

Copyright @ Poet.11 January,2019

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
MAHTAB BANGALEE 14 December 2022

Let the sparrow fly; fly over the sky to spread the peace of freedom!

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David Wood 14 December 2022

Lovely poem, I agree with Mahtab below.5*

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 December 2022

only to hear it for real

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Nabakishore Dash 14 December 2022

Enjoy rapturous serenity in utter tranquility.. Nice expression and we should be thankful to the creator.

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Unimaginable happiness is only in the humblest of homes. Fantastic poetry, Dillipji. Congratulations. Top score and Myfavourites

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Freni Karaluthara 17 January 2025

The sparrow's flight and the blooming flowers reflect a seamless connection to nature's serenity, making the poem a tribute to simple, yet profound, moments of beauty and tranquility.

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Freni Karaluthara 17 January 2025

The imagery of its melodious voice, in harmony with the cuckoos and breeze, evokes a sense of peace and renewal.

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Freni Karaluthara 17 January 2025

This poem beautifully celebrates the joy and vitality of nature, capturing the sparrow's cheerful song as a source of awakening and harmony.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 August 2024

Thank you Jez! It's nice to find your comment after so many days! Stay blessed

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Jez Burl 07 August 2024

This is such a magnificent write! Poems about birds captures the heart of the readers.5 stars! ! ! ! !

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