Love awakens any age
Fifties thirties teen
Grows to strength with steady rage
Ripe emotions sown!
Lust awakens any time
Midnight noon or morn
Goes to sleep that ready time
Mad water flown!
witty stuf... u make ur readers think hard... n thats pure inteliigence... and poetic mastery... :)
you made me laugh, what a beautiful poem... indeeded... iam so flattered....thats make my day so special.... thank you my friend....you everything to your poem... God bless your health
It is a beautiful work derived from wit and experience. I love it.
A concise and creative poem written in verse with rhythmic splendour, focused and factual. A witty composition. Thanks for sharing.
Subtle difference of ‘AGE’ and ‘TIME’…indeed very Original…so common before our eyes but not in words…yeah…Poet’s feeling can delve and bring out the occult truth…thanks Sir.. 10 {heartfelt] Ms. Nivedita UK
very cute observation lust: that panther lives within doesnot sleep at all..............
What ever be the subject, the way u express it is exquisitte and amusing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An amuzing write and enjoyed this as always with you writting style.... Bonnie