Love Came, Felt... Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Love Came, Felt...

Rating: 5.0


love
came on the rose petals,
came with the crystal rain drops,
came on the new born leaves,
came through the morning birds chirping

love
came with the tone of flute,
came on the wings of butterfly,
came on the lips trembling,
came without kiss

dark night hugged the feelings,
love slept here deeply

love felt,
felt every faded glory till the rising sun


-11/3/2019 9: 23: 00 PM

Monday, November 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
from my comment on "So Deeply Felt" poem by Sandra Feldman
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 04 November 2019

Yes, I know about your comment on Snadra's poem as you mentioned here. So nice to have noticed you were inspired by her poem. Sandra is very dear to me and that's why I visit your poem site to read your new-born poem, MAHTAB. A loveliest poem created here with such amazing words. BUT Love came without a kiss. Very pity. It could have a greetings kiss, no? But your Love Came, Felt is a gorgeous poem, A 10++++++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 November 2019

A lovely write! Loved reading this wonderful poem...........................10+++

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Kostas Lagos 04 November 2019

Excellent love poem Mahtab!

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Adeeb Alfateh 27 January 2021

love feels you everywhere wherever you go

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2019

Petals of love! ! Joy in your heart! Dreams of life; Love and art. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 November 2019

Love comes from many ways and a poet like Mahtab Bangali knows all those ways.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 November 2019

but I only P R A I S E THEE MB OF BD YOUR LOVE EXCHANGE IS lobolly

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 November 2019

nice lovely mb of bd but love comes always as morning wood its just L O V E L YOU O U KNOW IT AS LONG AS YOU WANNA DEFINE WHAT LOVE IS MB OF BD SEE PP ME IS being FUNNY

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