Love Eternal Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Love Eternal

Rating: 5.0


Gazing at the parting sun
The day with a deep sigh
Buries her saddened face
Behind the blue veil of night

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The sun in the dawn lifts the veil
Of his beloved in fervid romance
The smile she casts in shyness
Subdues in the envy of the mist

Tuesday, September 28, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: cute love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The sun is masculine and the day is famine. Between then an eternal love is hidden
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 28 September 2021

A very clever use of metaphors. Lovely write.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 September 2021

The smile she casts in shyness... beautiful. A tender poem sir..... captivating!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 29 September 2021

Sweet, cute, gentle love so very beautifully presented....Superb poem....5 stars

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M Asim Nehal 30 September 2021

Fantastic poem. I really enjoyed.5 ****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 October 2021

A beautiful poem full of metaphors embellished with superb imagery. Beautifully crafted. To my Poem List.

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Indira Renganathan 23 November 2021

The most inspiring poem...excellent....top score

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 October 2021

Revisiting this marvelous poem adorned with crystalline imagery and great metaphors.

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Soran M. H 19 October 2021

A sad and beautiful painting of nature that teaches us the meaning of life and death, two quartet stanzas that deserve 5 stars

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Soran M. H 19 October 2021

Buries her saddened face Behind the blue veil of night

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 09 October 2021

This is so beautiful! 5 stars and to my List.

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