Gazing at the parting sun
The day with a deep sigh
Buries her saddened face
Behind the blue veil of night
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The sun in the dawn lifts the veil
Of his beloved in fervid romance
The smile she casts in shyness
Subdues in the envy of the mist
The smile she casts in shyness... beautiful. A tender poem sir..... captivating!
Sweet, cute, gentle love so very beautifully presented....Superb poem....5 stars
A beautiful poem full of metaphors embellished with superb imagery. Beautifully crafted. To my Poem List.
Revisiting this marvelous poem adorned with crystalline imagery and great metaphors.
A sad and beautiful painting of nature that teaches us the meaning of life and death, two quartet stanzas that deserve 5 stars
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very clever use of metaphors. Lovely write.