Love Is
Like a strawberry Ice-cream,
That melts your pink heart,
But warms the chilled mind,
With oodles and oodles of
Sweet yum yum cream!
wow how wonderfully expressed about the love.....Love is always love as beautiful as we express it beautifully
Truly fantastic. Love need not be a serious business all the time. This poem shows us that there is a small child in everyone of us which loves to remain a child and makes its presence felt once in a while. Thanks, Geeta ji, for placing on record such innocence in this love poem of a different kind.
A great metaphorical poem on love and life is astutely delineated by you dear Dr Geeta madam. I remember thr glory of childhood when we were eating ice cream in group saying yum yum. According to your pen Love is more sweeter than oodles and oodles of sweet yum yum cream! Beautiful poem with attractive graphic.10
i can 'speak to'** the effect of ice cream on my 'heart' and 'mind': i get fantastic effect(s) ! ! ** i mean i can 'address the subject of'. mention of " oodles" makes me think: someone should make ice cream-flavored noodles. bri :)
This picture of ice-cream is so delicious! My favourite line - " But warms the chilled mind" .. so apt!
Nobody has written like this on love so far....you win....very interesting write..many many stars
The wonders and effect of love on one's heart and mind is vividly depicted on this short lovely poem. Beautifully crafted. Great metaphor and images..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
And my heart is craving this pink strawberry delicious yummy creamy chilling. 😋