Lover’s Rhymes Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Lover’s Rhymes

Rating: 5.0


mesmerizing melodies upon beloved hearts
where is a true love there are heavens
on sincere souls of fragile men
like Abu Nuwas’ spellings
magically hypnotize

O ye charming panorama
of humble delicate tune
your loveliest voice
pours mornings
and nights

if love descends
no one will be
betrayed
hurt or
left

soft
like leaf
as eagle’s wings
vigor and responsible
a simply clear and honest

beyond
sky and sea
vaguely emotion
enters secret gardens
of angels, saints and fairies
that’s why Red Sea also reflects

green
and tender
gracious as light
of full moon and sunrise
O ye sweetest smiles and kisses
flow in our innocent dreams and hopes

(dedicated to a great singer, Amr Diab)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 01 June 2009

Perfect........ Perfect, flawless write full marks...10+ great work

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Surayya Abbas 01 June 2009

Nice feelings.lovely poem.

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Alf Hutchison 01 June 2009

This should be set to music Ahmad...regards Alf

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Ravi A 01 June 2009

The last two lines really elevate the poem. Nice verses.

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Merna Ibrahim 01 June 2009

A great poem and i really like this stanza because it is so true: if love descends no one will be betrayed hurt or left It is a good thing that you dedicate this poem to the singer Amr Diab...I hope he would see this poem! ! :) 10++....Merna

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Sonya Florentino 10 June 2009

does form follow function or function follow form....hhmmm.....

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Kuji Soliman 04 June 2009

i dont like Amr Diab much, but i loved your poem! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++

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Surya . 03 June 2009

vow..meaningfull words and lines. loved it.and a great dedication. posted 10 love surya

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Sherif Monem 03 June 2009

Super poem and flows easly.

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Seema Chowdhury 02 June 2009

nice style used to write this poem.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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