Make Sure When You Ascend The Ladder Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Make Sure When You Ascend The Ladder

Rating: 5.0

Before ascending ladder, beware
for the world above is filled with despair
with each step, your ego will inflate
but soon you'll realize it's all a charade
the higher you climb, the thinner the air
and everyone's just trying to get their share
you'll meet the elite, the rich and the famous
but behind closed doors, their lives are aimless
they'll tell you success is all about the money
but their empty hearts will leave you feeling funny
you'll see politicians, all smiles and lies
but their greed and corruption, they can't disguise
the ladder of success is a treacherous climb
filled with deceit, selfishness, and crime
so before you ascend, take a moment to think
Is this really what you want, is it worth the brink?
for once you reach the top, there's nowhere to go
but down, where you'll face the harsh reality show.

And when you finally reach the top of the ladder remember,
it's not success, but your character that matters.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 March 2024

A well thought out and crafted poem full of wisdom. Great lessons of life and so cleverly expressed. Tommy favorites.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 March 2024

This amazing poem about climbing the ladder, I call it a philosophical climb with a psycological effect.Top Marks!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 March 2024

Indeed, it is always our character that matters, on earth, in the sky or highest above on the societal ladder. Finest words created her, Sir, your poems I constantly like very much and I have enjoyed immensely, Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir.5 Stars Highest Marks!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 March 2024

Very True and Graet Advice TFS Bravo Asim! ! ! !

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Rob Lamberton 08 March 2024

"it's not success, but your character that matters."

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 March 2024

A lesson of life expressed through this poem with profound wisdom.......10 + To my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 March 2024

One should attempt climbing a ladder only for a good purpose in life. Otherwise, one can come crashing down with much sorrow.

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Darren Jkoeryo 09 March 2024

Nicely conceived poetry.

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Anjandev Roy 08 March 2024

This is an impeccable piece....... wisely penned.....thank u.... friend.....

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Juhaina Tumlu 08 March 2024

Very well written poem.

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