Friday, March 8, 2024

Make Sure When You Ascend The Ladder Comments

Rating: 5.0

Before ascending ladder, beware
for the world above is filled with despair
with each step, your ego will inflate
but soon you'll realize it's all a charade
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 March 2024

A lesson of life expressed through this poem with profound wisdom.......10 + To my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 March 2024

One should attempt climbing a ladder only for a good purpose in life. Otherwise, one can come crashing down with much sorrow.

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Darren Jkoeryo 09 March 2024

Nicely conceived poetry.

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Anjandev Roy 08 March 2024

This is an impeccable piece....... wisely penned.....thank u.... friend.....

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Juhaina Tumlu 08 March 2024

Very well written poem.

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Brian De-Costa 08 March 2024

Awesome ending and a great piece of advice.

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Rob Lamberton 08 March 2024

"it's not success, but your character that matters."

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 March 2024

Very True and Graet Advice TFS Bravo Asim! ! ! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 March 2024

Indeed, it is always our character that matters, on earth, in the sky or highest above on the societal ladder. Finest words created her, Sir, your poems I constantly like very much and I have enjoyed immensely, Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir.5 Stars Highest Marks!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 March 2024

This amazing poem about climbing the ladder, I call it a philosophical climb with a psycological effect.Top Marks!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 March 2024

A well thought out and crafted poem full of wisdom. Great lessons of life and so cleverly expressed. Tommy favorites.

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