Making Pour Choices Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Making Pour Choices

Rating: 5.0

My throat is dry; I need a drink,
but what should that drink be?
Whiskey won't do, nor wine as well;
they don't agree with me.

I could have milk or lemonade,
as both have a great taste.
There's Mountain Dew, and Pepsi, too,
but each soft drink's a waste.

That carbonation's bad for you,
according to my daughter,
and she's a nurse, so I agree,
and I'll just have cold water.

Saturday, July 15, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: daughter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jim McGill 16 July 2023

Good choice, but…there is an old saying: worm in water—lives; worm in whiskey—dies; so, drink whisky if you get worms! I'm just trying to help out here.

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Bri Edwards 16 July 2023

Kim, I especially have, so far, enjoyed 'Dew/too'. The title is, of course, 'to die for'. YOU have 'forced me', once again, by not allowing me to vote with stars, ....to make this a 'favorite', which I MIGHT HAVE DONE, on another day 'down the road'. bri : )

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M. Asim Nehal 16 July 2023

Nothing is better than water.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 July 2023

A wonderful and interesting poem with a captivating title. Yes, water is good. Well crafted with great rhyme. Top Marks!

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Rebecca Navarre 22 July 2023

Ah, And excellent choice and so refreshing too! .. A marvelous poem! .. And wise too! ..

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M.J. Lemon 28 August 2023

Brilliant, Kim! I go through a routine almost every morning about what to drink. Then I almost always go back to ice water.

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Susan Williams 19 August 2023

loved the word play title! ! ! !

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Susan Williams 19 August 2023

sigh--why are all the drinks and foods we like so bad for us? or are THEY lying to us again and it is all a campaign to make us miserably healthy

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 July 2023

Bravo Kim Encore! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 22 July 2023

Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Kim Barney

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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