Valsa George

Man And Woman - Poem by Valsa George

Man - delusive
Woman, elusive
He feigns what he is not.
She fails to see what she is.
While he holds some charisma,
She remains an enigma.
He is steered by the head.
She, powered by the heart
He stamps
She struts,
When over ridden by pride
He oft gallops on the mare
And she wades through the mire.
He stings if angered.
She stoops if cajoled.
He is a sickle,
When she is so fickle

But Man and Woman together build life.

Comments about Man And Woman by Valsa George

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/18/2018 7:51:00 AM)

    Dear madam, you have nicely distinguished between man and women. Though they have some differeent qualities yet they both generate beautiful families. Your way of presentation is much chanting. I like the beginning.......
    Man - delusive
    Woman, elusive
    He feigns what he is not.
    She fails to see what she is.
    While he holds some charisma,
    She remains an enigma.
    Thanks a lot.10
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  • Bri Edwards (11/26/2016 1:32:00 PM)

    man - delusive? ?

    (Google time) :
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    adjective: delusive

    giving a false or misleading impression.
    the delusive light of Venice
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    it's NOT the man's fault if the woman can't understand us! ! ! ! ! ; (

    He is steered by the head..................which one?
    But Man and Woman together build life.
    yes, the teetering lives......for many!

    you have built some intriguing images and posted some fine rhymes here. :)

    bri :)
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (8/11/2016 12:37:00 AM)

    Together they build life! Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (11/26/2015 3:03:00 AM)

    Ladies creates man and women, very nice, please read my recent poem especially dedicated to ladies. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (7/20/2015 8:33:00 PM)

    Beautiful equation.Man and woman differ in their show of emotions.But they complement each other and together they build life.Nice poetry. (Report) Reply

  • (12/11/2014 2:42:00 AM)

    And it's not just a juxtaposition of gender differences but of combining the not-so-distant features of both that upon coming together builds this world.......Valsa......very nicely composed.....great write as always...... (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (10/28/2014 9:52:00 AM)

    Men and women are complete contrasts but that is the key of attraction. (Report) Reply

  • (11/12/2012 1:16:00 AM)

    And so the saying, ' Behind every man`s success there is a woman' has been driven home through these lines.
    Some one was telling a joke on these lofty and fair equations, ' Behind every woman`s success, there is a man and still behind him is there one more man -her husband! . I am pondering over why he is galloping on a mare?
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  • (11/1/2012 10:41:00 PM)

    exposing the truth in words powerfully....beautiful (Report) Reply

  • (8/23/2012 10:14:00 AM)

    Well now, I think you summed up our gender differences extremely well in this short and
    truthful analysis, .I had to chuckle as I galloped away
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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 1, 2012

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