Me Is Not Me Poem by Bharati Nayak

Me Is Not Me

Rating: 5.0


Me is not me
But a drop of nectar
dropped to the vast ocean of your heart.

Me is not me
But a fragrance
Flying swift
To the heart of your heart.

Me is not me
But an existence
That exists ever
In the centre of your heart.

Me is not me
But a wandering cloud
That wanders to the domain of your heart.

Me is not me
But a vibe
That vibrates
To the pleasure of your heart.

Me is not me
But a spark
That sparkle to the jest of your life.

This me
Want to be
The whole and soul of your love

This me is total me
When I become you
You become I
And say-I love you.

Friday, October 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was written on 26-02-2007.I found it while searching formy old poems, many of which I have lost.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 11 October 2019

A mesmerizing poem upon Love, you captured the essence of true love so well, dear Bharati. It must be mutual, how true love oft goes. I have enjoyed fully this making of love, with lovely metaphors, True fascinating read, a greatest.pleasure and so impressing. A 10 Full Score and much much more, dear poetess

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Bharati Nayak 13 October 2019

Thank you dear poetess Sylvia Frances Chan for reading my poem and giving your valuable comment.

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Kostas Lagos 04 October 2019

Quite a treasure you had there! Thanks for posting

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Bharati Nayak 04 October 2019

My hearty thanks and gratitude Kostas Lagos for inspiring.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 October 2019

me you really are for HE SAFELY KEPT URSELF HE WILL SEE DO NOW READ CDN POEMS 1 TO 10 DO VOTE KINDLY POET LADY

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Rebecca Navarre 04 December 2022

Ever so romantic! .. And written with such beautiful beautiful heart! .. Beyond #ing! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 04 December 2022

Oh, How deeply heart moving and beautiful! ..

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2019

Existence! ! ! Wandering around! Love and life, In search of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Muhammad Ali 11 December 2019

Soulmate. These are feelings and expressions absorbed while being a soulmate. Wordless emotions though arranged in a nice poem

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 October 2019

wow superb insightful poem// me is not me but thy superb existence from unshaped to shaped o the great LOVE! ! !

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