! ! ...Melancholic Poem by Seema Aarella

awesome composition...words flow so naturally in your poetic mind...10/10

excellient piece of work.....great usage of words......i loved it.

Awesome poem...nice to read..well penned..10

I succumbed like the heap Of clay on the potter’s wheel, lovely words full of meaning a little bit of melancholia in your poem but still its awesome -10 anjali

'I succumbed like the heap Of clay on the potter’s wheel, And lost hold on my life'.... these lines beautifully allegoric...imaginative and poetic...a poem in tone sad...10

A brilliant portrayal! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! given 10.

very nice written. i like your style. keep it up

Could not be written better than this. a drmatic change in style. metophars unique.10

Truly poetic. Beautiful lines, memorable read. What a nice change in ur style.

Days passed unproductively As agony snowed heavily on The precincts of my stimulus, Wordless and insensate, I sat Staring at the barren white pages. Seema, it really needs courage as well as skill to write such a poem. You have made an amazing painting of depressive phases in life. Soo truthfully n insightfully written, the imagery is so genuine and can't come from a heart and mind who has not experienced the state of melancholy... I salute you for this write of yours... God bless you Regards, Kamran