Gleaming pond of maiden tears,
Adorned by wildflowers on its banks,
As butterflies rush on blooms,
She watches them from shining pond,
Her hair trailing her beside in cold,
A weaved piece of dark fairy gold,
Her eyes feel,
Face softens and nothing is said,
And far from shadows,
He watches his mermaid…….
A thought provoking and well crafted metaphoric write that clearly shows your writing abilities and talent! 10+++ Thanks for sharing and keep it up! Romeo, New York City
I love thie so much. Anything with the word 'mermaid' automatically will get me interested, but this was so beautifully written.
wonderful imagery fused with amazing imagination very good poem awesome..! ! ! |
And far from shadows, He watches his mermaid……. Simply wonderful! 10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A lovely picture.